yooooooooo peeps stop sleepin on dis battle.uppin for votes

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Damn nigga we need some muthafukin votes in this bitch
Dawgfatha 13 my nigga got the first vote congrates

thx man.but were still uppin for votes.stop sleepin on dis battle bitches! no beef yayoman

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Oh no beef at all if any thang i got respect
but these niggas really need to hit up this battle

dawg-Nice spit........You came hard and weak with it which means you took this
really by a lil though......you had everything uncluding similies and
metaphores......just work on a few things and ya will be there......

yayo-Came kind of weak....Work on something structure was ok
but work on some thing.....balace was good but some was
weak and some was hard.....But keep elevatin and work on alot
of things

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yo thx for the vote. uppin.........................

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This was a close battle both were whack, no good punches no real good personals, One one hand I want to give it to Dogg cause he had better flow but his punches weren't as good as YaYo's. I don't think better flow should get a win in a battle not unless its topical or some shit like that. Becaue YaYo had better punches that were more thought out he gets my vote.

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dawg won this because he had better flow and rhyms the other was way off because he kept making mistakes of putting the flow and rhymes. Nothing decent just a basic battle here with no creativity, no complexety, no multies but have to say that dawg came in the hardest with insultive words.

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yo yo yo, i am like tupac cuz of rhymez/
and lyrikaly i can beat-you-up-criminally//
i am a killer and you cant sway me/
because man brendas got a baby// (dope)
can u imagine me being less then the dopest man/~
hell no dawg, cuz im almost as dope as 50 cent man//

uppin.dont sleep on this battle peeps

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This was kinda of a close battle, after I read Ya's vote I knew that Dogg would only need to come reasonably hard to beat him, and he did. Better punches all round, better flow and more creativity thats why he take this win. Maybe next time YaYo.

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uppin

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Yayoman
Flow 6/10
Rhymes 6/10
Structure 5/10
Punches 6/10
Humor 5/10

Dawg
Flow 9/10
Rhymes 7/10
Structure 8/10
Punches 9/10
Humor 7/10

vote = dawg

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