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Old 05-05-04, 09:54 PM   #1
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enygma this was str8 up hevvy, man this contained so many disses, da calgary joke was bit out of order but dats da way i like it. The kiked out off crew joke was da funniest line of them all.

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Old 05-06-04, 02:30 PM   #2
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Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
worst line
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else
nice
He still remains to lag.........couldn't man up so he changed to drag
alrite, good rhyme
This dude's from Calgary.......no wonder he's considered a flamin fag
thats jst merciless...i like dat
Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
gd stuff
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew
lol lol lol funny shit
Down to battle me?.....I'll have you lose weight like countin calories
hevvy rhyme
Leavin you in awe of me...like when Bill Gates announced his salary
wiked, bringin bill gates into it
I'm givin you lots of lectures....it's bout time you stoped your effort
nt v. good
You always wanted to make it...I'm just helpin you drop your record
alrite ending

vote - enygma
 
Old 05-07-04, 05:17 PM   #3
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Aight...

Bar by bar...

Laugh cause you're seldom felt...I'd whoop your ass so go run and tell
Plus you're nice wit a mic device....when you hand it to someone else
Hahaha...nice opener...good punch...8/10
He still remains to lag.........couldn't man up so he changed to drag
This dude's from Calgary.......no wonder he's considered a flamin fag
Good personal...punch coulda had betta wordplay...seemed forced...but good meta....6/10
Who ya runnin to?.....ain't gotta leave ya abused wit somethin new
Cause he's still nursin the wounds from gettin booted from his crew
HAHAHA...hot....10/10
Down to battle me?.....I'll have you lose weight like countin calories
Leavin you in awe of me...like when Bill Gates announced his salary
Nice meta...decent punch....7/10
I'm givin you lots of lectures....it's bout time you stoped your effort
You always wanted to make it...I'm just helpin you drop your record
Good punch and closer....8/10

Verse Score - 39/50 = 78%

Good verse overall...couple bars weren't as great as the others but nothing bad....solid verse with funny meta's and good hard hittin punches....wordplay was straight....flow was good...good drop...

Enygma, 7 losses...this bitch still gettin some praise,
1 week title reign...yur 20 minutes r up, no 1 will rememba the 'nygma days'
Not that great of a personal...coulda gone places wit it but bad wordplay and it was stretched...4/10
Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks,
Okay meta...but no hard punch....5/10
'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,
Still not feelin you....5/10
Nygma's talent is exactly like my sig....nothing,
He's so outta hip hop...he thought running his mouth was blunting,
Hahaha...gettin betta....8/10
I'ma fuck you up verbally, til u lookin like Rick Rubin,
I'm the DICTATOR like Castro, and you're just a dirty fuckin cuban,
Don't like these meta's...stretched too....5/10
Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard,
It's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third,
A lil betta....7/10
I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes,
Now this was a good bar....9/10
Nothing is better, then what you scribbled wit dat pen,
I guess your falling off the cliff, of your wits end.
Not that great...6/10

Verse Score - 49/80 = 61%

Aight your verse wasnt as good as i expected it to be...Just boring punches and meta's....couple bars were nice but u have to come hard against high level emcees....lot of ya shit was stretched wit fucked up ya flow....so work on that....jus keep elevatin and use harder meta's....

Vote - enygma....keep droppin yall....nice battle but expected both emcees to come a lot harder...
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Old 05-05-04, 01:15 PM   #4
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Thanks for the input......2-2.....lets keep this one going...
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Old 05-05-04, 03:30 PM   #5
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::Breakdown::

this was an overall good battle...

enygmas-

Yo structure was good, personals, wordplay Punches didnt really hit hard.
It looked like enyg u was in a rush didnt really take time.

jpolls-

J had betta punches that some were played but it hit, But he was lackin on personals It was a good overall verses by both.

V/ J because he had betta punches that connected. Enyg am dissappointed my man.
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Old 05-05-04, 11:06 PM   #6
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that's horse shit...fucking hate vote extreme...he's on my black list...on don't think that vote should count...cause he's been bitching at me all over the site after i ko'd him...that vote shouldn't count...he's blacklisted...
 
Old 05-05-04, 11:06 PM   #7
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whatever luminaz just because i KO'd you you have to come into my two last battles and vote against me...eventhough i beat the other guy 5 to 1...and i should beat enygma...whatever...that's weak...

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Old 05-06-04, 12:34 AM   #8
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vote people...it should 3 to 2 for me...cause the last person was blacklisted...but anyways it could tied...or i could be up...but anyways VOTES we need votes...
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Old 05-06-04, 09:43 AM   #9
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3-2 for j-poll right now luminaz's vote not explained well enough if he comes back and edits it with a better vote then it'll count
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Old 05-06-04, 02:57 PM   #10
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where's my verse????????????^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
hmmm?????
such a hate vote!!!!


hahahhahhahhahah that's hilarious...ahhahah someone on my blacklist list still dirtboy... so what if he explains his vote... whatever though...hmmm does it seem to anyone else that theres some pm'ing going down....you're a bitch luminaz
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Old 05-06-04, 03:27 PM   #11
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shut up

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shut up j poll u lost, paranoid or sumthin?
 
Old 05-06-04, 03:50 PM   #12
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don't freepost you no skilled bitch...and how about you comment on my part too...hmmm.. yeah i didn't think so because back to back my rap wins...he might be better then me...but i took it this time
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Old 05-06-04, 04:35 PM   #13
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^^ actually luminaz is a whack bitch voter.
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Old 05-06-04, 04:36 PM   #14
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uppin it's either 3 to 2 for me or tied at 3 to 3...uppin though let's get some votes yall
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Old 05-06-04, 05:45 PM   #15
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look guyz dis is my 1st time votin , i saw peeps only puttin the one they thought that one on their reason so no disrespect to j poll or shadows edge.

j poll, i can admit u beat me on our battle but i have the right to have my own opinion in votin. Shadows edge i aint gt nuthin against u i jst wana put my reason up bout j poll's rhyme.

Can't take ur eyes off my keystyle, you stare for 182 blinks,
Ur rhymes don't affect people, too weak, like watered down drinks,
(blink 182 has a song called watered down drinks)
WATERED DOWN DRINKS IS GD BUT IT DOESNT DISS ENUFF

'Crhyme Syndicate', ha these half-wits r the king of the cirlce jirk,
A femcee asked to join, they said only if u buy a strap-on first,
THIS IS JUS WEAK AND 1ST LINE IS THOUGHTLESS

Nygma's talent is exactly like my sig....nothing,
He's so outta hip hop...he thought running his mouth was blunting,
(blunting=smoking weed, or meaning for being blunt is to talk openly)
THIS DOESNT MAKE SENSE AND DOESNT EVEN DISS

I'ma fuck you up verbally, til u lookin like Rick Rubin,
I'm the DICTATOR like Castro, and you're just a dirty fuckin cuban,
(rick rubin is the producer in the new jayz video, he's dirty as hell, castro is the cuban dictator)
BEST LINE - VERY GD

Bitch you're the worst emcee 'vet' I've ever heard,
It's just us two, but in this battle you'll finish third,
(he'd finish third because nothing is better than his verse)
WEAK RHYME, THIS TYPE OF STUF BIN DUN B4

I call your crew 'The Seinfelds', cause your a bunch of jokes,
U threw me a free pass by you, I'll catch it everytime like JJ Stokes,
(his verse is like a free pass, like in monopoly...to go by him...and i'll always catch it like jj stokes of the 49ers)
U EXPLAINED IT AND IT STILL IS AS BAD AS NT EXPLAINED

Nothing is better, then what you scribbled wit dat pen,
I guess your falling off the cliff, of your wits end.
(the end of the cliff is his wits end...that's why he's falling off)
WTF WAT A WEAK ENDING

VOTE - ENYGMA
 
 


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