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huh~!
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IP: 4289 77F4
Aight Aight Aight// Nice Drop// Yo Nigga U Hot// I Wonder Why Da Hell Da Army Let U Go Fam// But Its All Good No Beef//
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IP: C8F8 76D1
But to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write//
So ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can *think* that ur tight// .....THAT WAS NICE.............REAL QUIK WITH THAT PUNCH Yo i thought this was a real solid battle but overall the meta is betta ya heard and true killa hit it off yo toxic i really dont have much advise for ya but maybe just elevate the metaphor a bit but still yo you did drop nice and first....
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IP: 4DBA 6427
aight check it
this was a nice solid battle on both sides Toxic dropped a nice verse tried to use some meta's up in there-had some nice punches and personals-not a very elab vocab struc was but your flow was nice Killa dropped a nice verse -used a nice vocab -his punches and personals hit harder and his over flow was just better toxic you didnt lose this by much just work on hittin harder with your punches and personals Vote=True killa |
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bingo!
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IP: AAF4 20CB
ok breakdown for true killa!
overall verse *8.5* good structure nice flow good punches good meta4's breakdown for toxicverbz overall verse *7.5* bad structure,bad flow,fair punches,no meta's flow:true killa punches: true killa strcucture: killa meta's : killa my fav line:Im blunt with my words and aint bad wit the disses either// Fuckin niggas up wit my speeches like I boned the english teacher// nic meta phore least fav line:I'll snatch you by your neck and do a suplex and step Crack your neck while I break your arms, catch your breath in the beggining toxic elf-glorified his self nice battle v/true killa!
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IP: 555D 7D8A
Cmon Ppl Stop Sleeping On My Battles Every Time I Fucking Battle My Shit Gets Slept On Where Then I Go To Front Lines And See Other Ppl Getting Votes On There Battles Cant I Get Some Fucking Votes On My Battle?
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IP: 9928 846B
Be ready and at ya best
The celebrity match of death whack bad opener Heart snatched through your chest, cardiac arrest In all disrespect good made up for opener I'll snatch you by your neck and do a suplex and step wtf Crack your neck while I break your arms, catch your breath Then I asked the ref, 'how many cats is left?' ok that was gay One on one, Come get did All I have is a pen and punish you kid cuz you are messing up Abdomen punctured and look what I did to his wig Wanna live then I stab 'em in the lung with his rib wig and riba didnt rhyme Every word I say detach a vertebrae from your spine Rematch wherever we meet at, any place anytime that was tight Get your snot-box smashed with a 9 Smacked with a rhyme, push your forehead to the back of your MIND// good scond line whack After beating you its fair to say that I've dismantled half your crew, Ima make you murder public news by fucking burying you on "PayPerView"*/ tight best line This battle's been over as soon as I showed up so there aint no need for me to pass the mic, Cos If victory crossed your mind then you more confused than a retarded hermaphrodite/bad ending you was good but work on punches Im blunt with my words and aint bad wit the disses either// Fuckin niggas up wit my speeches like I boned the english teacher// that was off the change yo good opener You better smoke some trees as a ghost writin tool// Toxic you couldn't write on a higher level if this was college rule// hott shit hott shit! But to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write// So ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can *think* that ur tight// best line to me yo best line Green with envy, punches useless cuz im searing ur retina preventing the skill to see // Dogg You couldn't spit in the "present" if you were under a Christmas tree // that was good but kind of put you back. Toxic you thought you were pretty tuff you looked at me and "roared"// I proved I can kill you with 8 fingers 2 thumbs and a "keyboard"// no this is your best line fuck that you got two great lines. Toxic I got you under "raps" like a gift under the tree// I make a mess of you like I forgot to lift the seat when I pee// weird but hott oh just got it lol I got this battle won look at the damage I did// Toxic couldn't beat me if I was one of Joe Jacksons kids i think this is the best battle ive seen. you got this yo but toxic had good rhymes but you got it. |
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20/20 VisioN
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IP: F7AA 225C
this person had a better flow and had good structure as well as some decent metas:
Im blunt with my words and aint bad wit the disses either// Fuckin niggas up wit my speeches like I boned the english teacher// You better smoke some trees as a ghost writin tool// Toxic you couldn't write on a higher level if this was college rule// But to be honest, I dont be feelin ur shit when u write// So ill leave a virgins pussy on ur mind so u can *think* that ur tight// Green with envy, punches useless cuz im searing ur retina preventing the skill to see // Dogg You couldn't spit in the "present" if you were under a Christmas tree // Toxic you thought you were pretty tuff you looked at me and "roared"// I proved I can kill you with 8 fingers 2 thumbs and a "keyboard"// Toxic I got you under "raps" like a gift under the tree// I make a mess of you like I forgot to lift the seat when I pee// I got this battle won look at the damage I did// Toxic couldn't beat me if I was one of Joe Jacksons kids// Vote: True
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