Originally Posted by discharge

I flow clear as water, so come harder than ya pet avatar, 50 cent
Yur simply shit, you could spit on every mix-tape, and still aint in-da-MIXX
Im endin it, you will never lick me, but I bet in your spare time you lick pipes
Plus yo punchin aren’t hittin like you agreed on a fix’d fight
umm good opener not good punches though it didnt hit hard if it was a punch
THATS MY FAV LINE OUT YA VERSE^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
I flow clear as water, so come harder than ya pet avatar, 50 cent
Yur simply shit, you could spit on every mix-tape, and still aint in-da-MIXX
Im endin it, you will never lick me, but I bet in your spare time you lick pipes
Plus yo punchin aren’t hittin like you agreed on a fix’d fight
I been tight, like me and da homies in a big fight, or a ziplock’d hemp bag
Youv’e been trash, we wouldn’t feel you if you wrote your lyrics on a zig-zag
You talk hard but you don’t live dat, b/c inside yur soft and I can sense that
So you went on and enlisted, in a arsenal of sorry hoes basically cuz you need help
I be packin heat, you only strapp’d in seat, wen securely wearin ya seatbelt
Im roundin second, headed for home on da microphone with astounding aggression
And if you win this battle, I know u was askin 4 votes like a student council election
MY SHIT IS POTENT LIKE A PUREBREAD, & YUR PEDIGREE IS MIXX
U BARELY EXIST, LIKE A SINGLE PENNY YOU DON’T EVEN MAKE SENSE(CENTS)
mix and cent dont rhyme
*7* overall
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mixx:
Scorch ya chin wit a 'fiery blow', so hard it leaves sooty handprints
and makes ya fuckin 'arteries glow'..
good opener but fix ya structure
Scorch ya chin wit a 'fiery blow', so hard it leaves sooty handprints
and makes ya fuckin 'arteries glow'..
Harmin this hoe till his talkin cease, cus 'pacifist movements' is the
only time u 'walk with the piece!'..
Yo, I drop dominant punches Im God to greet when I
break-n-puncture both knees..
Never try-n-oppose me cause Ill leave you more shook than Eskimo
brides with cold feet..
No one wants your shit, it's the truth no hate, Putting your C.D in
your 'blood stream' is the only way it'll ever 'circulate'..
Shit im too fast for thinkin, you get smacked every time you blinkin,
and like a bad 'kitchen installer' you cant let the loss 'sink in'..
Spittin with bullets, your lines couldnt blast a shell, with full
gauges already dispelled..
Plasterin dealt, triggered you from the 6 fasten ya belts, shots
sending ya crashin to hell..
*8* overall
ive seen better outa you just keep elevatin aight
good job both but throw harder punches
my vote/ mixx