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Beatmasta k 0 0%
DeLeon 5 100.00%
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Old 05-08-04, 01:03 PM   #1
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alright now lets get some votes....uppin...............
 
Old 05-08-04, 02:16 PM   #2
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where are the fucken votes DAMN!!
 
Old 05-08-04, 02:41 PM   #3
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My vote goes to deleon cuz his personals were hilarious
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Old 05-09-04, 12:00 AM   #4
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this was a decent battle...beatmasta i think you would do better in audio than text your verse was more of a spoken piece u had to like say it out loud to make it sound better so i think in audio that could have worked but in text that lacked in alot of areas...u had no punches and u had alot of filler you talked more about yourself than your opponent and your structure was a lil off flow was ok but if u wanna be a text head u need to elevate alot...deleon quick is right from what i have seen from you...you got potential to beat some other cats on this board...this verse was sick...good punches nice metaphor in the AIDS...HIV lin...good flow and decent structure...closer wasnt too hott but stilla nice piece

vote: deleon he stayed consistent throughout his verse and it was all around better in all areas

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Old 05-09-04, 12:04 AM   #5
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YO DELEON HAD ME skerred at first with the start but u came back on em in the end
im note gonna do the blah blah format and blah blah weak shit that everyone else does when voting seems like everyone here has weak everything i think the both of ya could elevate more but did a nice job puttin ur shit down deleon being a lil more experienced is why im votin for em .....keep strivin yall
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Old 05-09-04, 12:32 AM   #6
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alright preciate yall droppin ya votes on this.......
 
Old 05-09-04, 01:25 AM   #7
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LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL LOL// YO BEAT ONCE AGAIN MERKED HOMIE//

DELEON

PUNCHES

10/10 You gettin' -ripped in text-, askin who's next? I'll leave you layin' at rest/
AIM nerd, kid's so ugly, he lost his virginity -to cyber sex/ LMAO DATS SO FUNNY//

FLOWZ 10/10
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BEAT

PUNCHES 4/10
FLOWZ 6/10

U KNOW WHO WON DA BATTLE// YO BEAT STAY LOW DAWG// U NEED TO WORK ON YO PUNCHES FLOWZ AND PERSONALS//
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Old 05-09-04, 12:12 PM   #8
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Uppin For Some Honest Votes................
 
Old 05-09-04, 01:05 PM   #9
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come on yall lets get this over with.......
 
Old 05-09-04, 02:20 PM   #10
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come on now lets close this out so i can battle someone else.........
 
Old 05-09-04, 02:28 PM   #11
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Beatmasta k-Boring verse.flow was bad,stretched lines.
Best line-if i catch they niggaz first their gonna get this shit for u thats true
and i can by a murder charge since ma digits are so fuckin new
Worst line-so sun lets go try beat my rhymes
it was me doin crimes back in 1989

Deloen-Nice verse.Nice punches and flowed better than beatmasta.
Best line-You gettin' -ripped in text-, askin who's next? I'll leave you layin' at rest/
AIM nerd, kid's so ugly, he lost his virginity -to cyber sex/
Worst line-You new to this shit-bet you'd like to beat me//
but you better quit now before you need a "night light" to sleep easy//

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Old 05-09-04, 02:35 PM   #12
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Yo KS you didnt poll your vote dogg................
 
Old 05-09-04, 03:23 PM   #13
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ok check it

vote deleon easy

that cyber sex line cealed the deal but you need to quit stretchin your lines like that if you do use mulites or somethin or its gonna kill the strength of your punch and beat masta just go to tutorials and see how to elevate or stick to makin beats brah
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Old 05-09-04, 03:42 PM   #14
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Haha...DeLeon...you have this easy...

Beat...I think you would do better in topical or somethin if you elevated...your verse was horrible dawg. No as horrible as the last one I saw...but damn, your punches were played, you had no personals...you had a half decent flow, but some lines were stretched.

2/10

DeLeon...haha...you had some funny punches dawg...cyber sex line funny as fuck...but like E-Looch said, ya have to stop stretching ya lines dawg...you have this battle easy. Overall nice verse...

8/10

Vote- DeLeon

No hate...hit this up honestly it's bein slept on hard...thx...

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