yo sorry for freeposting but insidious is you from old rb as sidious????

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Inside
Struc- 6/10
word- 6/10
personal-2/10
punches-7/10
Humor-5/10

Cream
Struc-7/10
punches-6/10
word-5/10
personal5/10
humor-6/10

Cream 28/50
insid 26/50

Cream-vote

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Idisous

Flow 6/10
Punches 5/10
Vocab 7/10
Rhymes 7/10
Wordplay 8/10
31/50
C_R_E_A_M

Flow 7/10
Punches 6/10
Rhymes 7/10
Wordplay 8/10
Vocab 8/10
36/50

V/C_R_E_A_M

THIS SHITZ SLEPT ON!!!!

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Free Agent

okay here is the break down

punches: insidious
flow: insidious
personals:insidious
wordplay:cream
overall: insidious

cream you got skill but here the only thing that killed you was the personals but you put up a good battle

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The Legacy

Its Only Getting Better

indsidious takes everything except da flow for me so im up 4 indsidious

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"LIVING AND EXHISTING ARE TWO DIFFERANT THINGS"

YO NICE SPIT FROM BOTH OF U//

0k.....
i'll rap b0ut gunz juzt ta get u scared-y0_
gl0cks dat'll leave u p0p'd wit n0 brainz like a scare-cr0w_
i palm t00ls like "GoodWrench" but i aint w0rkin-0n-cars_
da t00ls i palm,i juzt squeeze and if u d0nt die ur w0rkin-wit-scars_
diz dudez gay he club-wit-guyz_
s0 if i killed him y0 his l0ve-will-cry_
im way iller and m0re advanced in rhymen_ NICE OPNER I KINDA LIKE WHEN U WENT AT HIM ABOUT DA GAY THING//

s0 if i killed him y0 his l0ve-will-cry_
im way iller and m0re advanced in rhymen_
s0 i suggest u st0p,n0 im demandin u like sim0n_[sim0n says]
leave u kut "different ways" like a diamond_
kuz all i live is drug dealin and gangstaz wh0 l0ve vi0lence_
u up in da suburbs liven in heaven_ NICE MULTI'S AND PUNCHES NICE BODY// U CAME HARD STOP WIT DA Oo DATS DESTROYING DA EYEZ OF DA READER//

reality check,when i blast da tech u'll really be liven in heaven_
Ha! ya b0i said u sh0uld battle me? 0k,but why u rappin f0r_
when u kn0w imma put 14 lines in ya ta leave ya ass feelin s0re_[n0 h0m0] NICE CLOSA IT FEELS LIKE U PUT DA BOMB ON HIM NICE MAN

OVERALL= 36/40 WORDPLAY// FLOW// PUNCHES// PERSONALZ



Lyrikal master-mind? combine a death wish with stable-rhymez,
take a verbal BEATING...just like scoliosis i leave curves in-ya-spine,
u'll never make it big, this kid will never have ice like hot freezers,
hows he gunna 'get big' and 'come hard' when he jerks off wit tweezers!!
explosions in ur advatar, what's that all about? NICE OPNER U GOT CREACTIVE WIT DA TWEEZERZ//

never shot a gun, only "clickity-click" u get is from ur mouse,
ur mouth spits from ear-to-lips so how can u claim u spit hot?
i'll shove my foot so far up C's ass and wear his large intestine for tube socks,
this MC STINKS! but of course he earned the smell,
lesson 1, before u battle me, learn how to spell,
illiterate ppl piss me off, this guy's an MC who's lyrics won't sell// NICE BODY// BUT U NEED TO GET MO CREACTIVE LIKE DA 1ST ONE (DA OPENER)

the only way u having hot underground shit is if u rappin in hell,
fuck destruction, i'm a living obstruction to justice, killin u'n'all,
kill u, blow up the hearse and make u walk to ur funeral// NICE BUT U DIDNT COME HARD NICE PUNCHES BUT DIDNT DO ANY EFFECT// I WILL GIVE U CREDITS FO NICE FLOWZ AND WORDPLAY BUT PUT PERSONALZ AND HIT HARD WID DA PUNCHES NEXT TIME AND DEN U BE UNTOUCH//

OVERALL=33/40

CREAM WIN IT BY AN EDGE

DIS A GOOD BATTLE// BATTLE AGAIN DEN MAYBE INSIDIOUS MIGHT COME HARD//

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IAM BACK FUCKAH'Z HELL~! NEVA LOOKED SO GOOD

INSIDIOUS

Flow/Structure
Your flow was good I was feeling your verse all the way through. The structure needs improvements because it was pretty weak in places. Some of your lines were short whilst others were stretched mad. OVERALL 6/10

Personals/Punches
Alright, this was your best part, there was not many personals in your drop but the couple that were there were pretty funny. Your punches were good, some were played but mostly they were hitting hard. OVERALL 7/10

Creativity/Originality
You sort of did average in this department because whilst you had a tight rhyme scheme and you used some good wordplay you did not have anything all too special and some of it was pretty played. You had some nice multis in your verse but your best part was your metas because they were dope. OVERALL 7/10

CREAM

Flow/Structure
You lacked in this seriously, your flow was choppy all through your verse. This was probably down to the fact that your structure was weak, lines stretched and lines squashed when really it should all be kept together relatively the same length. You need to work on this area a lot. OVERALL 5/10
Personals/Punches
I can't really say that you had any personals in your drop at all which was a downer. You had some average punches, but none of them were really hitting. You were mainly rapping about guns and shit, you need to hit him with the personals and beef up your punches because you were lacking. OVERALL 5/10

Creativity/Originality
This part was really weak because you had some pretty basic wordplay, got nice in some sections. The fact that you were texting with some small letters and some capital and what not made it hard to read. You had like no multis and I couldn't see any metas in your drop. You used a gay line which is sooooo played out and you need to drop that and come with more original punches. OVERALL 5/10

V/ - insidious

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