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Old 05-14-04, 12:05 AM   #1
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^ no. i dont do tag anymore... didn't like it all that much first time.
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Old 05-14-04, 12:54 PM   #2
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Shadow came with a lot more punches that actually hit. VC didn't really have that many punches at all. He seemed to try and glorify himself more than put down his opponent. I think that is where he lost....

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Old 05-14-04, 09:09 PM   #3
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v/shadows edge because it sucked much less
 
Old 05-14-04, 10:49 PM   #4
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This battle was real tight even though VC you could have worded your stuff better bro I mean i felt where you was going wit it but just could've been better
 
Old 05-16-04, 10:05 AM   #5
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breakdown for shadow's edge:

flow:nice job nothing too complex i'd of liked to see more internal rhyming though 7/10

volcabretty good nothing too amazing though 7/10

punches:some nice lines for the msot part real personal best line i thought,"If you’re so fucking hot, why nobody read what you wrote?Face the facts: YOUR LAST BATTLE ONLY GOT ONE FUCKING VOTE!" nice job 7/10

overall:21/30

breakdown for VC:

flow:wasn't quite working on the same level as shadow your lines were streched out a bit in spots and wasn't really any internal rhyming to help it 6/10

volcab:good job no problems here 7/10

punches:a couple of nice lines the big problem was the amount of them there wasn't alot of concrete lines directed right for shadow best line,"I stay in the light,just outta the *Shadows Edge*/" nice name flip 6/10

overall:19/30

vote--good battle one of the better ones of the week but my vote is for shadow's edge
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Old 05-16-04, 03:30 PM   #6
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Vote goes to Shadow's Edge

Why? Much better punches without the gay n00b structure (all the // and whatnot)...easy battle to call. Basically, Shadow was direct and VC...well, i had no idea what he was trying to say...or why he thought it mattered and could belittle his opponent.
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Old 05-16-04, 08:48 PM   #7
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5-0 shadow's edge wins
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