i'll spit more rhymes with murders deadly venom
i blast u muthafucka point blank like that punk ass john lennon
Venom is played, and John Lennon? Thats not even a punch
enough weed to call ma joint back i ain't pretendin
i murdah wit my adrenalin u should be defendin
This is aiight, but its still not a punch
until ur very endin cos what i'm spittin is sick
when i come down in this shit like a ton-of-bricks
Nice word play but still no punch
i'm crushin everythin includin this son-of-a-bitch
i'm gonn-b-quick in n out when i'm gunnin-ur-clique
This punch was weak, but at least its a punch
just to let u know i'm runnin-this-shit right to the wire
take up fight-to-be-the-sire thinkin u raw but ur a fuckin liar
Weak man, fuckin weak. Elevate some hdawg, seriously


my rhymes are like my 9.they'll put more holes in u then swiss cheese
by the time in done with you, u'll be on ur knees sayin please, please
its a punch, like thee kind they serve at a prom
why u try pretendin like u a rapper kid when u know u ain got no flow
when im done spittin ull be like the twin towers on 911, dont exist no mo
Nice punch
my punches and flow will go straight through you knockin yo ass on the floor
u probably buyin ur bittin verses and rhymes from the dolla store
This is aiight
see unlike you my shits acually original
ur shits bland,boring, and jus plain out dull
You killed ya flow right here
aint nobody in therr right mind gonna vote for you
unless of course they suckin u off cuz they in ur crew
I ain't really feelin this, but its aiight. ELEVATE

So as it comes out:
eric89-2.5/5
mc murder-2/5

eric pulled this one out of his ass. Close, but both ya'll need to elevate

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i vote eric cause his shit and flows are way better than mc murder
mc murder needs more practice

uppin for more

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twenty takes this easy vote twenty

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uppin yo

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Uppin For Votes Lets Get This Pole Closed People. Thanks

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my vote goes to eric for better punches and better flow
my vote goes to eric

return the favor at http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124072

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yo dawg thanks for the vote still uppin though

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