UppN, thnx for all the votes so far yo

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

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UppN fo some votes yo

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Yo eric good spit its a solid rhyme but u do need to practice on some vocab. so pick up a dictionary so it can learn ya. Yo 20 you really need to work on flow you go from one subject to another to quick try to make it go to geather better.

I Vote: Eric

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

20 grand
good spit nice flow good punches you kept it flowing real good
it was maybe one of ur best, u did good real good

favorite line:
You cant handle this like a car with out a steering wheel//
Your a fuckin "fruit", only u dont have "appeal"// (<--- get it, a peel)
that was pretty hott
areas u need inprove ment on::::::::::::
multies meta4's and similies
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u had and ok spit eric 89
but it didnt keep me intrested it was kinda wack no offense
u had ok punches they were kinda childish
u had ok structure
and the flow was terribly off
areas u need improvement on:
punches and structure and the structure will really help ur flow
bets line:ut ohh someones chokin under all the heat
ima chew u up and spit u out like a lion does to raw meat
u liked it cuz u used a similie
but my vote swings the way of 20 grand

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damn eric nice spit
20 grand you wer pretty good to

eric best line
how u expect to get any votes on this battle
unless u ride someones dick like a horse and a sattle

eric-7.5/10
20 grand 7/10

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thanks luke uppin still

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it was close but eric got my vote in the end

eric6.5/10
20grand6/10

rvote 20 return da favor

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UppN, Plz explain votes holla..

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

UppN yo

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

Stillz UppN Yo

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

UppN, Stillz Yo

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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs