Originally Posted by HELLonEARTH

Da layout

Can’t find this “someone” in any news page
Cuz Yo verse less stiring than pre-made cool-aid
Good punch
yo I’ll beat ya spittin my worse put his punches in a google search
findings “no ONE” in his complete verse
this was alright
i know yo tricks, he jus copies and clicks
kids who ride this guy’s dick can make it under a 2 inch clearance
Ya ya its been done
cuz yo skills are low, like a river, but with no flow
Eh
take time when i rhyme best tolerate, cuz a punk should wait
for this finishing punch on this battle cuz it will punctuate.
What? Oh i see
heres sumin to remember
your lines couldn't out shine mine
if u rhymed during daylight saving time
and I was stuck in december
Nice closer


I'm not even sure if that's an attempt at disrespect,
as a seasoned battlerapper it's worse than I'd expect.
Good opening
Your lyrics were probably bought through 'mail-order'
containing more BS than a bull with a 'stomach-disorder'
eh its aiight
Now onto your mother, but you've all heard this before..
She's the original crack ass whore
Gets on the floor, spreads all four, no-one's unwanted in that cheap store
Stop hatin on da mommas
She didn't think you through -- pictureperfect2
coming straight from the zoo -- wasn't wanted there too
Ok punch
This bitch is way off track, I'd say 100 thousand yards
Like a cerebral palsy wrack, building a house of cards *
Nice punch
p-perfect's number ONE on the 'ranking list in town'
or at least that's what he thought, when he 'held it upside down' ~
Nice finish

Aiight the final
Picture-5/10
Someone-7/10

Return da favor
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