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Gambino 2 33.33%
XxToXiCXxVeRbZ 4 66.67%
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Old 06-02-04, 02:44 PM   #1
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causin' so many nightmares even Wes
'cravin(4)'// I wreck emcees neck and knees//reducin' life expectancies//
so don't stand close or next to me// cuz battlin' TOXIC is deadly like an
overdose of ecstasy// you're a prom queen going against a professional//
fuck wit' TOXIC ( Ha ha ha) and get removed like one of Tom Green's testicles

dat shit got me right there..flow off the hook..wordplay was on point...EXTREMELY close battle..jus feelin his lil more
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Old 05-15-04, 12:05 PM   #2
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& always use at least 1 personal in a BATTLE or its suspicious you could have bitten that verse from anywhere..
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Old 05-15-04, 12:17 PM   #3
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Old 05-15-04, 12:20 PM   #4
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^ Strange , Well if you start battling here you will see its completly different to frontlines. Check out the structure of previous battles.
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Old 05-15-04, 12:22 PM   #5
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You got good rhyming just it looks wack because your structure is everywhere
Spul, L.I & Egnyma , creative have good styles.
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Old 05-18-04, 01:57 AM   #6
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the BATTLE is strictly mine// battle TOXIC and get lynched with a
prickly vine// (well thats retarded)+your rhymes suck more than two faggots havin' sex in the sixty nine(3)(is gay lines played yet? i aint sure)// you ain't tough cuz you molest gay men(yet?)// I make U LOOK LIKE DEM HOMELESS KIDZ(so... where u goin wit this)//lung collapse and chest cave in// causin' so many nightmares even Wes
'cravin(4)(and this?)
your only punches were things about what imma do to u and jazz, no wordpaly or punches on his name and stuff, thats what i call good punches, i've heard too much of the stuff u jus spit

more of this-your freestyle is
cheap, it don't make cents
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so toxic your knocking on def doors....and dog no one hears you...
this and the first few lines were good.

cause dog toxins can only burn.......but they never have any fire... best line, nice punch on name.(personal)
coulda been better relating it to how he spits or sumin.

OH YEAH!......your on the road to riches!...but your car got side tracked...
makes sence and all, but aint a punch really, if u woulda related it to him being poor in the line before or sumin, like "your punches blew ya paper everywhere, u were makin stacks"your on the road to riches!...but your car got side tracked. sumin to relate back like that. so its more of a punch.

anyway this gambino characters i was feelin more, like ya punches and personals more

vote that cat

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Old 05-23-04, 12:48 PM   #7
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toxic didnt really like ya structure
kinda threw ya flow off

flow-gambino
multies-tie
metas-tie
punches-gambino
personals-gambino


gambino prettty much won it with this line

dog you must be dumb! and thats the truth so your....bound to cry...
so dont be mad! that your verse proves you can only count to five...

^^thats a great punch and personal

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Old 06-02-04, 12:37 PM   #8
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bringin' shame to GAMBINO// fuck you up so bad you change your name to
nympho// as I rearrange your brain and temple// for spittin' lyrics that
are plain and simple//(1) I'll have you chokin' soon like asthmatics
smokin' shrooms// and discard your body parts with open wounds in broken

^^ I recognize that nympho line from somewhere..punches are thrown...but kinda filler-ish...up wordplay


you winning! ha! thats obsurd....your wack.....and thats word....
cause the only thing you elevated was from a newb to a herb...
dog you must be dumb! and thats the truth so your....bound to cry...
so dont be mad! that your verse proves you can only count to five...


^^^ corny and weak opener...newb to herb?...blah...not creative at all


Vote: Toxic...more complex flow ...cuz punches were about even
 
Old 06-02-04, 05:46 PM   #9
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chea nice battle both emcees kame off good..but in battles i look for punches...or just a str8 diss wit personals...but ToXic i'd have da say u won this kuz u had sum sick punches and personals....GAM ya flow was nice but it was onda basic side nah mean,practice punches playa...
Punches:ToXiC
Multis:ToXIC..even tho dey wasnt writen like multis should be wit da "-" i pointed dem out
Opener:ToXiC
FloW:TiE....BoTh WaS NiCe
CLoSeR:ToXiC

V/ToXiC

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Old 06-02-04, 08:01 PM   #10
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i think Toxic got this one with great punches and flow

Gambino i think his structure was pretty good, but he lacked the punches

V/Toxic
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Old 06-02-04, 08:02 PM   #11
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damn, its elevated front lines, lol srry yall, ya still get my op tho
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Old 06-06-04, 01:11 AM   #12
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aight i vote for gambino cause u had more punches and yours sounded more like a battle cause u concentrated on bustin on him. ur flow and creativity could use some work but good punches made up for it.toxic ur sounded like a freestyle that coula been written for anyone no real punches so i gota vote gambino

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Old 04-09-05, 04:31 AM   #13
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upppppppp[p ...........................................
 
Old 04-09-05, 10:10 AM   #14
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Old 04-19-05, 12:52 AM   #15
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im gonna vote for toxic because gambino isnt here anymore so he doesnt deserve the win

thats dope right

vote: toxic
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