jaydogg.....c'mon man step up ur game....ur shit is really really basic....u're just writing about garbage....spit some punches man......i dont really know what else to say to u....that verse was really weak......

villain......some advice...u NEED to stop with the quotes.....do not make every single one of ur punches that type of wordplay....u need to be versatile...u can have a few lines like that......but,not in every single punch......feel me? it was becoming too repetative....n i dont find those types of punches to be too hard hitting......u know what i mean? nothin blew me away in ur verse punchwise...but it was a lot better than jay's...u spittin on a higher level,u can tell by the vocab at all..but u need to work on ur punches.....stop quotes...holla

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jaydogg u really need to elavte badly cuz super just merked u dogg with his killa rap

u made a fatal error enterin' this "prizefight"...your "weak punches" are empty//
think dog...your not in the "limelight", in hindsight, your only "green with envy"//

when it comes to "the eatery"...c'mon, "i'll easily chomp u"//
im the "mutated canine in the hulk", your "the dog in legally blonde 2"//

im not a "dog catcher"...more like a "hammer", 'cuz i simply "pound puppies"//
switch it around backwards, "my flows" like the "rivers intensity", so i "drown guppies"//

obviously, u got alot of "issues", so let me "cancell this subscription"//
dog dick looks like the tip of lipstick, u prick, i hope your girl knows what she's missin//

please dont "provoke pain" or i may just have to "pull ya choke chain"//
i'll engulf "flames"...and have you "gourmeted" on overweight "chinese folks plates"//

^^ that wasnt that good but still good enough to merk jaydogg
super ur flow punches and everything else was just better thats y u get my vote