ok,heres the breakdown

XxToXiCXxVeRbZ:real hot verse,good wordplay,your flow had me wondering at times,your structure couldve had more time spent on it i think.
best line:dis niggaz starin' @ da mirror askin' whoz da best n' all he Cz is my -reflection-//-infestation- of -complication-/i'll discard dis nigga "Degame" without -consideration-/dis nigga wuzz done b4 he started like a birth -complication
good lines,but rough flow and structure.i liked it because you had alot of the same words rhyming almost perfectly.
worst line:You'll be dead for it - endure it
Morbid cold like Nordic
The hydrochloric - pour it
very short,doesnt really fit in with the rest of the long lines,but its pretty decent
work on:you need to work very hard on your structure,no doubt about that,um your flow could use some smoothing up,but apart from that,your fine.
overall vote: 8.5/10

wayne backk,right from the beginning it was obvious your verse wasnt up to toxics,you had better flow,less personels,but some good disses,and your bars were pretty decent too.
best line:tox, your own words Fail you...thats why you FeeD off Rejection
You need this Flow to Survive like blood types and Intravenous Injections
thats a good personel,good structure,um pretty good wordplay,real good line
worst line:im ferocious with lyrical potent notions for wannabe votin coaches
couldn t knock me out with punches if ya slippin me sleepin potionscome on
this line has good strucure and flow,but its sucks hard.i mean,it barely rhymes,or im just too blind to notice the rhyming.
work on: your wordplay and disses.
overall vote:6/10

FINAL VOTE: XxToXiCXxVeRbZ

reasonm for vote:he just had the upper hand.except for his flow and structure,he beat you in everything.

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toxic and ya god damn d/r voters, yo wayne took this easily he killed it. toxic, what the fuck was that, not a single decent punch in the whole shit, you just basically told him what you'd do to him if ya wasn't a lil internet bitch, and told him to pour acid on his arm.

wayne, nice verse. this line killed it
tox, your own words Fail you...thats why you FeeD off Rejection
You need this Flow to Survive like blood types and Intravenous Injections
and yo nice structure and flow, as toxic had no structure i dont know what the fuck that vote was before this. u had some hot punches and have got the concept of a punch too. nice spit

vote wayne

^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ calling us dickriders????????hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahaha.hotter verse?pretty harsh.but w/e man

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dawgfatha_13 he got tox on his respect list so you kno he a dickrider
look at the votes dickriders no real votes

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sorry toxic but this newb gotya.....................
wayne ur structure woz beta,beta flow easier to follow
toxic ur structure woz fucked n ur rhymes didnt make sense
it woz way ova-complicated
wayne urs was more basic but punched rite on target...keep it up kid

vote-wayne back

ayo drop by -O- vs. NightRida i think i won the battle but people ae saying i copied Lloyd Banks or some shit but i didn't i need some votes holla back 1

dont free post bitch

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punchlines- wayne
metas- wayne
vocab- wayne
disses- wayne
creativity- wayne

vote- wayne

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single file, single files hoes come on in

lmao hey guys wayne is bribing me 2 vote for him lmao im goin to vote truthfullt

punches-tox
flow-tox
overall-tox

my vote-toxic

bitch i ask you to vote bitch not dickrider if i brib you post the pm bitch he next

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multis-toxic
flow-toxic
opener-toxic
closer-toxic
metas-toxic
personals-none
punches-toxic
vote-toxic

Sorry daaawg, I dont think there was any competition for Toxic's shit wid what u dropped. Good job to both MCz doe and congrats to whoever wins...

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