Deleon: nice flow and rhymes that was pretty good but no punches dog and macka got some good punches nice flow and nailing it -Vote Macka

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WhItE CrAcA

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yea u might look tough but in the end this shit
is mine u can intimidate but still have the same fate, losin to me - White Craca

damn, ok, some votes have been disqualified, so uppin for more i gess.

its these fuckin newbs explained your votes so we dont got to wave um off
i'd rather have vets vote on this.....like choppa city did

Deleon

Best Line...
My Razor-is-Pressed, I made it Graze-through-your-Neck
I'll Drown you Greater-in-Depths of a Lake-when-it's-Drenched

Worst Line...
My Range-and-my-Lex are full of Paste-to-Inject
Tripping till you're thinking you're in Space-like-a-Trek

MACKA

Best Line....
You got no punches like a right-handed Jim Abbott while I smash-your-chest//
You’ll regret trying to spit against me so you try and “catch-your-breath”//

Worst Line.....
Make-you-feel-pain, shakin-your-“frame” like earthquakes-to-a-window//
Lyrically rape your wife while my verse-makes-her-a-widow//

Macka-I Liked You Punches Personal And Structure But The Struucture Was Pretty Off

Deleon..Loved YouR Verse But Didnt Have Any Personal's Your Structure Was NEat

But I Guess Macka W0N ThIs......

Damn!guess going easy on a newb has come to bite me back in the ass twice
no more of that shit ...but on the real nice drop macka

macka you didnt drop the vote i my battle so when you vote in it I will vote in this so till then........ya better poll

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Macka-alright stuff but came weak and hard
structure was ok but deleon's was better.......SImilies
was ok so was the metas.....SImply work on the balance
also the complexity.....

Deleon-Came ok....but not that alright.....some was ok
some was simply weak....structure was good similies
need work metas was ok......Personals dont really know
Complexity ok......Keep elevatin aight

v.Macka

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