ayo everybody when u get done with this battle vote for somebody in my battle cause i think i won i am only 16 and i am goin against a 25 year old check my shit out holla back

Uppin

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big up to poppa doc. terror was too simple you got to up grade. papa got it in every area except for in opener i just wasn't feeling it dawg but it was all good. vote pappa doc

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Popa Doc?Well its time to end u check Ur Clock//
1-4 Thats just sad,You should be shot with a Glock//
^Weak 6/10

U get the Death Sentance and U get the Lyrical Injection//
Tryin to Win a battle u Always end up in Straight Rejection//
^Best Bar In Your Whole Verse... 8/10

You just got the 10 Bar Murderous Flow and Dash//
That Blindin Light was u dien on the Mic just watch the Flash//
^Ok.... 7/10




Checck Checck
ayo terror is tryin to be scary, tryin to frighen me like a terrordactal/
in actual fact, i'll cut you some slack, be careful where your treading/
cuz i got a layer of ice surrounding, you don't wanna be liein drowned/
i'll rip your head off like I got a shot gun triggerd n blowed the fuck out/
your a mark on my terortory spot, shoot a bullet spinned n hit u on ur temple/
your a wackass rapper who thinks he's clever wid friendly smiles/
to me ur nothin but piles, who was a good for nothin for a while/
you get stuffed away like a scotch egg, with extra bread crums/
fuckin dumass i'll put you ina wheel chair, cauturpuling you to the damn air/
your girls call you hunny cuz dey rob all every penny of money you own/
this bitch is contantly stoned and moans cause he can't get a job/
your a shit manuer, a shit piler, bringing any kinda shit to make you wilder/
your a horny fuck stuck wid ya bitch of a hour, old lady lover, ceressing wrinked ass liker/
your one pound of shit from me, couldn't measure brain waves from me/
i say dis swifty like im lifting your soul by graverty, levertating into a furnace/

^Lmfao Elevate' .. Kiid' All Im Saying!!!!!

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unholy gets my vote cause of better meats. thats basically it this battle was hella weak. both verses need a lot of improvment

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:*fAiLUrEs*:
two and counting

Uppin

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Uppin votes to end this.

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unholy rocked the mic right popa doc u had some hot shit but unholy was flawless so he gets the votes

votes/unholy

not a lot to say...popa doc u dint even rhyme...wack...no punches no nothin......

unholy one wins coz he came harder than u period
bassic verse but easily enough

Uppin this.

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this was a pretty close battle, but just some of the shit popa said, it didnt fuckin rhyme at all, no matter what you did, and i really didnt sense many personnals, but i believe terror had more, so ill go with terror

vote-Terror

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