wow this battle was way back, ive elevated a lot since then, uppin

uppin uno

Vote=VA

VA got my vote because he had better punches.Popa needs to work on hie rhyming,cuz to me his stuff was not rhyming at all therefore leaving him no flow therefore just fucking it up for himself.VA had better punches,but could work the structure a bit.Both should try to add a couple of multies in there also.

Hit one of my battles back,after all,I did take time 2 read this shit!!!

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obviously :va: won this battle....popa doc your verse hardly rhymed at all...you had mediocre punches and a basic verse all around...va you had some good multies and wordplay and a couple decent punches but you both need to elevate...va your verse was pretty good until the last couple bars and then the structure just went to sleep... your lines were short and uneven no flow...really bad stuff but popa yours was even worse...you need to elevate in all areas

Flow : ::VA::
Structure: popa
Punches: VA
Multies: VA
Wordplay: VA
Consistency: VA
Personals: none

vote: VA

weak battle

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