Uppin On This Shit Again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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King u want to challenge me but i'll put in a hell hole grave
u ain't worth shit because your damn grave in a no name grave

^^ that's poorly worded and not that strong of a diss

after i buirrd you alive i pissed on your grave
u talking about u a king after i finish with you u become a queen

^^ then, u repeated the rhyme for the next bar...NO NO...and tried to rhyme it with QUEEN...wack

u gayer then the gays in the united state u a fucking queer
I'm the fucking king around here i'll make u my bitch

^^ WTF is a "gay in the US"...are gays in the US gayer than gays anywhere else...that was wack.period

they only way u win is wrestler these bitch to make them scared
but i'll tell u right now who in the fck you thing u scaring

^^ kid,...this is garbage...the rhyming is asanine...and the punch is weaker than hell...WTF!?!


10/40


Facing this bitch, check this battle...his fuckin rhyming is a joke
So you get me I’ll strangle you cuz the only word u know is ‘choke’

^^^ Ur opener is enough to beat this joke

30/40


pssf...

Vote: King

Uppin On This Shit Again!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Vote Honest And I'll Return Tha Favour!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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ok this was an easy decision
falling angel-i think u need to work on ur stuff a lot more the only suggestion is that u need to improve everything u said grave 3 times at the end of 3 lines in a row

king solo-u easily took this punches were good u really concentrated on makin fun of his rhyme i thought the rhyme scheme worked out and u had a good opener

yo vote on these battles please
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124727

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=124620

my vote-king

king nice flow and puchns
otha guy nice job but king was betta


vote-king solo

yo get uppin on this shit man!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Solo-Nice quik murk....You beat him/She
Very easy and quick battles...Had everything
including similies and metaphore also structure
Nothing need to be worked on but flows a tad more

Angel-You need to elevate more
structure was aight but need to come harder.....
you Need to work on alot of thing though
keep elevatin

v.King solo

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