lil trip - okay verse....u had bad flow b/c of stretched lines...your punches were okay in place but others were wack....work on using more and better meta's....use personals....not good wordplay on this verse so elevate there...this was ur best bar....
Lets step up the skill, show me some shit of yours above 3 syllables
yo lines are like you in this rap game, so fucking invisible
Verse Score - 6/10

shadows - good drop....better wordplay and flow...had a personal or two in there....some nice meta's....and all ur punches hit....i liked these two bars the best....
Clear to the rest of us though, shit’s pre-written
Drop my name once or twice… just so we don’t think them lines bitten
I mean shit, it’s clear I’m battling a square this time…
Because this kid got matched by a shadow with just 4 lines….
you had a more complex verse and thats why you got this...nice drop....

Vote - shadows edge

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=125317

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My vote goes to shadows egde cuz fuckin newbie ass lil trip bit off my battle... I said get yo head wrapped like a hindu in one of my battles... coincidence i think not

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Man it’s sad, a whole verse with no personal in it
And you trying to pass it off like a work of 5 minutes
Clear to the rest of us though, shit’s pre-written
Drop my name once or twice… just so we don’t think them lines bitten

^^ nice personal..shit is tru..good

We could rematch forever, I know it’s an idea you dread
Cuz like an uneven coin I always come up ahead
I mean shit, it’s clear I’m battling a square this time…
Because this kid got matched by a shadow with just 4 lines….

^^ good closer

Its ok if my earlier post bout Iraq, got yo whole mentallity pissed
the way im Spittin Now, i deserve to be "Grindin" wit Clipse
don be mad cus youll never win, im jus a kid wit a gift
this aint a battle its n assault, your tomb gonna read too Dissed to be missed


^^^ I am not feeling this structure...the rhyming is not good

up complexity of punches


Vote: Shadow...better verse.period.

Just one more vote... leave a link and I'll drop an honest vote...

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shadow vote on this battle so we can get some votes goin yo opinion is always respected...:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=126416

whooooo!what a newb tryin to spit some fire huh?lol...OK!


any ways Lil Trip...
ya punches had me shocked at times
Shadow this is me spittin, n wit the way im spittin n talkin
im doin circles on you, this forum must think im Cwalkin...lol....good lines7/10
im droppin you faster than 24's on a denalhi, you want me to spin you?
the way im hurtin yo head lyrically, they'll need to wrap yo head like a hindu
^^^^whoa!LMAO 8/10
but the things is you fail to be consistent
ya flow was rather choppy
but overall I give you a 7/10...elevate and you will be killin cats in no time




Shadow...I think you and I both agree that you wasn't expectin him to drop like that....anyways

Punches....damn....you Zab Judah with tha punches

Hoping for a happy ending, but I got your life’s script flipped
This kid trying the road to success, but only manage a lil-trip
OH shit!lol9/10

Won’t drop a verse like that for three months if I continue this way
Because I hit so hard your ghost writers are demanding disability pay
^^stop the madness!...rofl 8/10

ya flow was real easy to read ...almost like I wrote it....8/10
overall you get a 9/10 and my vote