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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
White Powder 5 100.00%
fine mind 0 0%
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Old 05-20-04, 03:54 PM   #1
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haha that kids style is so fucking out there its not even funny
 
Old 05-20-04, 06:15 PM   #2
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Yo... when you vote, please make it longer and a bit more indepth, I know this kid didn't rhyme, but at least write

Multis -
Flow -
Structure -

Stuff like that cause then it won't get banned, and it may give us better ideas on ways to improve..

Anyways UPPIN.......
 
Old 05-20-04, 06:23 PM   #3
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Votes Conducted On!!!

Punches: Powder
Flow: Powder
Structure: ----Otha Cat
Multies: Neither
Character: Neither
Creativitie: Neither!!!


You wanted to battle me, you didn’t know im on a winning spree//
You ain’t gonna stop it that’s a guarantee, and im pretty damn sure everyone will agree//
^Weak Openener But Yet Better Than Any Of The Other Cats' SHit!!... 6/10

Cause you cant rap, your lyrics are wack, imma fill u fulla more holes then 50 and Pac//
You obviously don’t know jack, you think you spit hot shit but all your lyrics lack//
^Did Really Have A Rhyme Scheme.. On This Bar'/Lines' .........!!! Etc; ..


Weak Verses..!!


Like I Said.!!

Vote: Powder.....................
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Old 05-20-04, 07:12 PM   #4
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powder got dis... Dude fine mind... wtf was that? ur first verse didnt even rhyme... i had to read it twice. ur structure and flow was horrible, but its not the worse ive seen.
powder nice job, not ur best but good enough to win. good flow, structure and much better punches den fine mind.

vote : Powder
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