allrite imn gonna give it 2 cam he came harder good verses from both both need 2 work on structure especially mercury both need 2 work on ovcba multis and personals also

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Humor~ Fam
Metas~ Fam
Multis~ Merc
Vocab~ Merc
Flow~ Fam
Finisher~ Fam

Overall Vote~ KillaFamFlow

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rofl both yall dudes need to work on your rhymes alot this battle is garbage.. grade a at that

mercury your verse was childish it wsa filled with a bunch of conry lines nothing hit hard at all.. your shit was just plain asscrack..lmao that lil flip line was the only bright spot in your whole verse

killa- your shit was garbage also but i think yours was better than mercury you had some weak shit aiight but wordplay of yours was better than mercuries

vote- killa for commming less herbish than mercury did

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single file, single files hoes come on in

This nigga claim that he can flow, but he bought his rap from a cat for ten blows.
You must have a chemical imbalance or somethin', only Viagra keeps the blood pumpin'.
My rhymes will make you terminally ill, no one cares if you're dead but I'll secure the kill.


^^ Work on your structure by shortening up your lines dawg...also, work on complexity of punches and rhyme scheme


fam leave ya A B C rhymes at the Door//
evn if i gave you a free win you'd still want More//
nigga im like lloyd but witout tha Banks//
if we compare us, then your the lil bike and im tha Tank//
this isnt MTV im not aston kutcher and this battle aint a Prank//
when another loss is added to ya column i'll be the one to Thank//


^^ Simple...u need to make ur lines more complex with metas/wordplay...but, it was good enough to beat MERC. because your punches actually hit

Vote: Killa

yo dis battle wuz kinda one sided mercury did have good structure but hands down killa took dis one but on da onerall dis battle wuzn't all dat great i seen better stay up and elevate

vote-killa