Yo Citys verse wasn't all that bad it had ight punches(lil weaker) but established a sense of flow. Ya Should Throw In Some Multis And Strengthen ya punches 'n' personals

Boaty Ya Verse Had Harder Hittin Punches and personals, Which Ya Held Down Pretty Good, Ya flow was wstablished as well, and seemed to have the better verse, good battle overall

vote boaty

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cityboi- i didnt really like your structure u had some punches in there no personals punches were hittin aight flow was aight

boaty -ya flow was good and so was ya verse u had a lot of punches no personals but your punches hit harder and you had betta structure

best line was "My rhymes will have you runnin off a bridge like Eminem did to Stan" that one was pretty

basicall with harder hittin punches v/ boaty


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Boaty got this quite easily City u really need to work on your structure coz i had to read ur verse twice to get the rhyme scheme it needs to elevate also you had no wordplay except for the Pam line which wasnt all that good. Try improving your wordplay and punches the personals are there but could do with improving to better luck next time dawg but boaty got this due to the experience.

V/Boaty

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