ok in my opinion both of ya'll had pretty good drops but I would
have to say I thought HELLonEARTH had better punches, flow,
structure & all that therefore HELLonEARTH gets my vote in this
battle don't hate on me for sayin the truth!

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um ok

E- man you had no personals or punches sorry battle period man ok that was a weak showing agianst someone who will take advantage of the man ok

hell- no need to explian personals punches- that was just a one sided battle

v/ Hell

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Aiight thats 2-1 to me uppin fer votes will return da favor

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hell on earth becuase he had better punches and rhymes so my vote hell on earth.

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oookayyy

HELLONEARTH ~ur flow was good,ur punches hit decent,u had a few personels,but ur structure was crap,so u must elevate on structure,everything else seemed good.....okay

ECLAPT~u flowed a little off ,ur punches were ok.ur structure was wack also,and i didnt see any personels....so work on finding personels,and get a better structure okay,and try to work on ur flow also


v/hellonearth

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dis battle wuz ight i guess i mean they wuz ight hell had betta punches and overall flow so daz where my vote goes

vote=hell

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Both of you cats were cool, but i will have to narrowly give this one to eclapt, the line "homo gets angry over head cause someone fucked his thought" was one of the best line i have heard in a while. SO he gets my vote.

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Aiight 2-2 uppin fer votes on dis battle
Will return da favor

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Don't sleep on this
UPPIN FOR VOTES WILL RETURN DA FAVOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Eclapt i know your new and not trying to hate but take this advice. When you battling say shit that would piss you the fuck off, gotta throw more and harder punches, Hell on Earth threw hard shit dissin ya dick but need to use better metaphors both of ya.
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HELLonEARTH u got my vote

HELLonEARTH: u plain out greased this dude. ur punches were aight. structure o.k., and fuck personals u dont need to know shit about the nigga. u had really good sim, and metas in there
ur best line i think with a decent punch:

Call ya self "Al Gore", because you won't win this "Lyrical election"//
Ya weak and ya ain't straight, like a Dysfunctional Erection//

weak opener: (it was lame)
Ridin "Mens Cocks" the only way you could be an "MC"//
Get sumbody's attention


Eclapt: u did not get my vote 'cause:

u need to get to writin before u start postin again. no lie homie. just need to elevate.
lines and structure was horrendous. i actually got bored reading urs stuff. there were no punch lines. overall to be honest i was not just feelin it dawg.

my v/ Hellon Earth

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