ohh..... both werent great.. but.... i think outsider got this by a hair...

This was weak ass battle.

Both came lame, Played as fuck.......even retards could do a betta verse. K had fucked up verse yours the most played verse i ever read, originality has to go to outsider. He also had betta punches i wasnt impressed in neither one of you guys. This was herbish for realz.

V/: OutS

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Lets get this shit closed people!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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this battle waz close they both had good verses and good punchlines but kre-z had betta personals

votekre-z

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look, you people are dick riders. I clearly kicked his ass, he had some non-rhymin peice of shit.
Anyway, one more vote to get this closed

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outsider........your punches was good........but you could use some elevation.......you could wrok on re-wording your punches.......so that they hit harder.......work on your structure because your lines are uneven and it throws off your flow a little bit....but keep elevating man you got some potential

Kre-z.......I have deffintly seen some of your better shit......this was kinda not anything at all your punches was weak and i didnt really like your flow.......your structre was really off and it made your flow choppy.....keep elevating

v/outsider

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outsider really needs to get some flow...and style too for that matter ha. I thought kre-z took this fairly easily with punches, flow and wordplay
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