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Old 06-10-04, 01:49 PM   #1
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lemme try out in this shit, my first rhymez in a month so here it goez...

menecin' rhymez is what i am so what u doin comparin' to ya shit
bitin stylez like you a shark but i got tranquilizerz, tha spit fluid im my mouth is sick
more infamous than mobb deep that'z why i'm rare in this time of day
so don't even push me around cauze i ain't ya momz or ya weightz
you gettin fucked up like a women drinkin while she'z pregnant
and i'm talkin bout yourz, 1 of tha apocalypse 4 horsemen and i'm here to end this
not even a trillianaire could get what i possess in me
i'm more skiller and iller than a chess team
i don't need success to get to beat you down like i'm a cop
ain't no chinese but these rhymez that xcape my breath could get ya paragraphz chopped

-tha untouchable
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Old 06-13-04, 12:03 PM   #2
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Mc's are feeble, I think your styles pretty nice and edable/
im incredable... i send high marks like fuckin lightning sparks/
spitting at all-hatter's these fuckin ignorant- imatators/
are bitch and can'tr work out metaphors, just taken for a tour/
i'll lift your spirit like gravety, and anighalate it, once i get in/
im gonna curse players by just staring and see wat der thinking/
So, let me in dis crew and i'll snatch my combacks wid out blinkin/

Can i be accepted please.
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Old 06-10-04, 08:11 PM   #3
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i dont no what the fuck happen to mc'sreaper but he aint around right now so i'm taking over spot of leader. which i dicide and hell yeah the _crazy _one you in so is cs and so is the un touchable.
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Old 06-10-04, 08:26 PM   #4
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here the link for the sig pm me if you got a question or problem i'll handle it:
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Old 06-10-04, 08:30 PM   #5
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yo A.k.A want to work together
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Old 06-10-04, 08:42 PM   #6
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on what dogg?
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Old 06-10-04, 08:45 PM   #7
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use my forum
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Old 06-10-04, 08:46 PM   #8
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but who is tha leader of this crew
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Old 06-10-04, 09:29 PM   #9
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ok ayo it be A.K.A., Mc's Reaper, CS, The_crazy_one, The Untouchable, Rush, White Light, and Ain't sure how to spell his name but it like Gangstabo1e
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Old 06-10-04, 10:33 PM   #10
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uppin 4 mo tryouts
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Old 06-11-04, 11:29 AM   #11
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ya uppin for more tryouts
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Old 06-11-04, 12:29 PM   #12
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here we go.....

lotta rooks tryin to get in and some of em did/
clear the leader spot hear comes the ko kid/
im the fukin best outlastin full grown stallion/
u dont trust jus peep my shyt against dis bitch 5micmedallion/(look at my sig and u will see what i mean)
ill blow bitched away while they sitten in the coup/
got a gun and a spoon im here to get the inside scoop/
and i could drop killa lined in hyroglhyphics/(antient egyptian writing)
im a high class emcee wit lines that exquisit/

what yall think holla back wit a pm if u intrested i will also check the forum to see if nebody said nething in here.........
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Old 06-11-04, 12:40 PM   #13
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its ok what do yall think lets let him Know
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Old 06-11-04, 02:29 PM   #14
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yo this is a keystyle that i did this is my tryout

my rhymes hit u in tha ~head and cause a contution/
make u fall back on your ~bed and say his shit confusen/
fill your body full of ~led and no this isnt a illusion/

now see my rhymes are just ~plainly obtrude/ (means to force on others)
look me in tha face and say i'm ~strainly rude/

my rhymes ~aint just one way u could call them intermigle/ (means blended)
they will make u ~faint it's a hunger that leaves u weak and febel/

my rhymes stay ahead of tha~ pack like erostion/
i never fell ~back cause of my none stop devotion/

other rappers rhymes i just consume/
ive been rappin since i was locked up in tha woom/ (yall know wat that is)
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Old 06-11-04, 02:30 PM   #15
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