yo big kountry what up man i seen this and dog you won with witty lines and pounches
hit me up link in sig

V/bk

big yours didn't rhyme very well it wasn't a good flow construction partly the way through but u had some a little rhymes but they were just too basic not one of your best battles big but keep trying and elevate and try to rhyme your owrds and use multies because that's what made you lose this battle.

that was a hate vote and i am geting you banned outsider

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upping 4 some honest votes

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uppin 4 some votes

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uppin for some votes

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I leave kids hurt, more patients for doctors/
Its the boy wit some many punchlines I feel like a boxer/
word is the bigger they are the harder they fall/
ya ryhmes is shitty rookie, you should spit in a stall/

^^ Interesting, but, it doesn't hit hard as a punch.

I leave you laying on the ground looking like the mike man(the micheal jordan symbol)/
so is you stupid or just retarded/
cuz challenging me you get beat like old carpets

^^^ Structure is too simple...up complexity of metas/wordplay/punches

15/30

im bout to switch to crush mode on this cat,
"mikeal jordan' has noting to do with gats,
Are you dope? I think not, Your nothing more than a big flop,
And since he can't drop good Shit,I'll treat him like a Piss Pot,
Confident? Sory gets negative votes cause he attracts opposites,


^^ Structure/rhyming could be better...but your punches are at least aimed more at your opponent thatn his were.


Vote: Big COuntry...harder punches