the breakdown...

first up is rush
u call yoself rated and yo ass being tailgated/
yo lyrics are so serious but mostly sound like 12yr old gurl on her perion/
what yo named suppose to mean rated mo like u was hated and then fated/
ur illiterate not even understanding what u sayn so please stop playn lil game/
i'm tha name on this site that people dont fuckn like/
cause rhymes are same and very much tha same when i came...Dame/
i'm not speakn gibberrish cause my rhyme make sense fo god's sake u cake/
u dont get my raps cause u had a overlaps was looking at tha first line so i had to spear u my time/
i did this so fast i made u lick my ass and call a CAB cause u payn my TAB/
tick tock tha clock just tha clock just stopped so get back on my cock/

wow i don't really know what to say to that verse...i don't even want to put ratings on it...but i would give it a 3/10...wow...this...in elevated...hmmm


now for rated
Aight check it
Rush stay in front lines not hate but we out of your range level
Murked this Hebish bitch so much he had to sell his soul to the devil
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Kid you want to battle so bad in elevated, Slow the hell down let us Be
You got murked so much he put toys all over his post like if this was toy story 7
Herb couldnt beat nobody so he couldnt do nothing but find lines and feed
Rush you wouldnt be rushin for victory even if you had aol top speed
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LOL you cant be joking, If I was you I would go ahead and choose your fate
Even noobs murked him to much he has to hide his identity from his old name spiky2k8
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Sorry if ya left down hearted but I have 20$ can I buy some beans(You farmer)
Spiky already knows Im tight, tighter then you and tighter the Beyonce's Jeans
8

pretty nice drop...

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Rush stay in front lines not hate but we out of your range level
Murked this Hebish bitch so much he had to sell his soul to the devil
6...weak opener, basic wordplay and not a gud punch!!
Kid you want to battle so bad in elevated, Slow the hell down let us Be
You got murked so much he put toys all over his post like if this was toy story 3
6...another pretty weak punch!!
Herb couldnt beat nobody so he couldnt do nothing but find lines and feed
Rush you wouldnt be rushin for victory even if you had aol top speed
6...first line played, second line was aight!!
LOL you cant be joking, If I was you I would go ahead and choose your fate
Even noobs murked him to much he has to hide his identity from his old name spiky2k8
7...funny line, better punch!!
Sorry if ya left down hearted but I have 20$ can I buy some beans(You farmer)
Spiky already knows Im tight, tighter then you and tighter the Beyonce's Jeans
5...weak closer, second line was pure filler!!


u call yoself rated and yo ass being tailgated/
yo lyrics are so serious but mostly sound like 12yr old gurl on her perion/
what yo named suppose to mean rated mo like u was hated and then fated/
ur illiterate not even understanding what u sayn so please stop playn lil game/
i'm tha name on this site that people dont fuckn like/
cause rhymes are same and very much tha same when i came...Dame/
i'm not speakn gibberrish cause my rhyme make sense fo god's sake u cake/
u dont get my raps cause u had a overlaps was looking at tha first line so i had to spear u my time/
i did this so fast i made u lick my ass and call a CAB cause u payn my TAB/
tick tock tha clock just tha clock just stopped so get back on my cock/

Ok i was gonna do a line for line breakdown for u to but lookin at ure verse i can't. i mean u half the time u can't really tell which lines are supposed to rhyme with each other. ure structure is fuckin wack as fuck and ure flow is utter shit to. u need to elevate hella lot cuz ure punches are all weak and personals just arent there. no hate, just givin sum helpful criticism!!

V/ - Rated, for overall better verse, one that i cud actually understand the rhyming of!!!

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aight my vote goes to rated for a few reasons. i liked ur punches some sounded like fillers but thats ok cause ur flow and structure were good and organized. rush u need to work on harder punches and structure and flow improve those and another tip is to preview ur verse before u post it so there are no errors

v/rated

aight return the favor fellas drop a vote in this battle
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...927#post1350927

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rated: nnot too hott of a verse but it was decent...good personal...and a couple good punches i liked the one about toy story and the beans one lmao @ that....rush your verse was really bad i think like your rhyme scheme and a couple lines didnt even rhyme which made it lose its impact...i think u need to elevate in alot of areas because that verse was a disspaointment...rated you need to elevate in harder punches and better wordplay/multies and your verses will start getting better and better

rated: 7/10

rush: 5.5/10

vote: rated

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rush your shit was elemtary
you lack good punches and personals were played to shit
your structure was ugly..but you had an ok flow
your wordplay wasnt too good but you try i see
consistancy was very bad..opener and closer were bad

rated: you had a good verse i think you tried to hard on him
you had good personals and ok punches
consistancy was good...good structure and flow
you took this battle easily
vote: rated

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Im blacklisted by rush so ill drop some imput here...

Rush you need to work on your shit.. you need harder punches.. better flow and a lot better personals.. im not even gonna start wit wordplay or multis lol

Rated / Meta you won this battle for sure.. you had some good punches.. and personals.. but you battlin a herb lols

anyways my vote would go to rated if i wasn't blacklisted by RUSH..hoe

anyways peace

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