http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=129834
vote on that..

IS took this for a better verse altogether.. punches hit pretty hard and flow was smooth..
CL your verse was ok but weak punches and flow was off...

VOTE.. Immortal_Souljah04...

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Damn Weak Battle...Cannibal...you new and all but your verse wasn't good...and your punches well really didnt hit hard..but some didnt even rhyme manye...but you said you tryed so it's aight all ya gotta do is just elevate manye....immortal you came weak wasn't your best but good enough for the win...so your verse was decent ...your punches were good also...so overall Immortal got his with a better verse and punches.....

v/Immortal Soulijah

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Wicked One vs C-Bo

aights uppin 4 votes and remember to explain it...and leave links if you want
i'll get back to it fo sho

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aights uppin 4 votes and remember to explain it...and leave links if you want
i'll get back to it fo sho

~Im OUT~

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Listen here immortal Souljah/
thinkn ur the best damn thing since michael Jordon/
^-/10 Weak Opener..!!

you shouldnt even be here/
you fucking wannabe emcee/
^Weak Closer -/10

!!

Imortal Soulja..:

all I need to win this battle is a keyboard and a 15 inch monitor//
fuck the rest. the screen & keyboard heating up a thermometer//
^Safe Opener..!!! Aight Punch!!!

you be trying to rhyme like keystyles in a really really tight spot//
if you even get one vote you be like Kobe in game 3 a lucky shot//
^Weak Closer' .. But Betta Then Any Of The Other Cats.. Lines' ..!! 6/10

Vote: Immortal...

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