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Old 06-25-04, 11:07 PM   #16
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lol.. damn aka merked truth aka....

aka
nice punchlines ... nice flow.... you had some nice personal's going into your rhyme....
i really enjoyed reading your verse.. and you really merked this cat there nothing more i can say favirote line was"You talking to your crew like "Im Battling A.K.A."they all like you can't handle that//Cause even the hobo on the corner no that i carrie the gat//...lol... and another thing try to stop with the // and start with ....iigiht

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damn son your shyt was wack im sorry to say... you really need to elevate alot.. and work on your flow.. punchlines were decent...personls were iight but i wasnt really feelin any of em'..and you also need to work on your structure....

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Old 06-25-04, 11:15 PM   #17
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From: holdin down the three-one-three
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in the hold thing the only dis you had was having part my name//
you spit two different times? they were so bad i thought they were the same//
STRETCHED LINE BUT FAIR PUNCH 5/10
the truth is that the ak will take you right out the game//
see i'm rite behind you with a gun to your head//
HOTT LINE GOOD PUNCH..7/10
and the bullet make you fall to the ground and no rise like jewish bread//
i done fuck up every thing you just said//
TRY TO KEEP YA BARS THE SAME SIZE 6/10
You talking to your crew like "Im Battling A.K.A."they all like you can't handle that//
Cause even the hobo on the corner no that i carrie the gat//
ONCE AGAIN GOOD PUNCH STRETCHED LINE 5/10
And i got an aim so good i could knock off your hat//
Don't fuck with me cause i can give you black eyes//
GOOD PUNCH GOOD FLOW 7/10
And the last time you got some thing wet was when you got Baptised//
Of that was when you were with the preist//
GOOD BUT BADD RHYME SCHEME 5/10
And i'll Bomb on your ass for no reason like we doing in the Middle east//
LAST LINE HAHAHA GOOD CLOSER 8/10

42/60


I'm the jury with a deathwish,get tha jist,after this diss
i'll be da icon,you'll be gone"so long"/
WACK LINE WEAK PUNCH 3/10
I might be a newbie at RB,but after this you'll be da fluzzy wannabee./
Truth rips lips n spits like babe ruth hits,outta tha bleachers"main feature"
TERRIBLE 3/10
slapped rats go splat n starve solo cats/
Relax stop stressin,its only a 10 line agression session/
Truth hates liars,pulls teeth with wire plyers/
BAD FLOW WEAK PUNCH 4/10
Im the type that likes drama's n beefs,
you tha type ta wet moma's bed sheet's
call ya self chief wearin moma's briefs/
JUST AN ALL AROUND HERBISH VERSE

EASILY ON SIDED
MY VOTE/ AKA THE REAL 1
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