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Limited Edition 4 44.44%
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Old 06-22-04, 12:42 AM   #16
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nice spit man close close battle.... good luck uppin^
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Old 06-23-04, 03:26 PM   #17
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^^^^^^^^^Werd. At least fuckin vote on this battle...for fuck sakes been slept on for like 4 days....
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Old 06-23-04, 05:05 PM   #18
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fairly average topical overall..............but the topic woz tricky
very close between..not much in it at all......

breakdown
Wordplay..basic from both nothing special...shadows slightly more complex
Flow-limited took it just...jus found it easier to read
Structure-both good...nothin in it really....
imagery...i think limiteds was again slightly beta...i like how he compared heaven and hell...i jus felt it more than shadows
multies..shadow..more of them

overall...tight battle
limited takes it for me..think his flowed beta,i jus felt his verse more,more imaginative.

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Old 06-23-04, 08:10 PM   #19
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Fuckin' uppin' this shit for closure.....at least we got a vote.
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Old 06-24-04, 11:38 AM   #20
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A'ight...uppin this mufuckin' shit.................................
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Old 06-27-04, 10:08 AM   #21
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damn uppin^^ madd being slept on damn....
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Old 06-27-04, 08:35 PM   #22
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ok fisrt like to say that sig that shadow has was made by me if you want one holla at me.
shadow was closer to the topic. like ever line went with the topic no trailing away.
Limited Edition some of your stuff was weird you said you going to hell then you said you love people what's that.
i liked shadow better
but it was all good
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Old 07-02-04, 08:19 PM   #23
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Ugh.......WHAT DOES IT TAKE TO GET VOTES??????????
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Old 07-03-04, 02:26 AM   #24
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Uppin' This Slept Shit...fuck Ya'll...if You Peep It Vote On It.
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Old 07-03-04, 04:12 PM   #25
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Upp this mufuckin slept on fuckin shit.......
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Old 07-04-04, 03:20 AM   #26
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Uppin' this fuckin' slept on shit...for fuck sakes...been open for a month...
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Old 07-05-04, 07:54 PM   #27
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FUCKIN SLEEPERS. This shit has been open for like a month...VOTE HOES!!!!!!!!
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Old 07-07-04, 11:38 PM   #28
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yo good battle ya'll shadow i had trouble understanding urs.. it was good but it was hard ... limited i felt u more on this i just think u came harder overall so my vote goes to u
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Old 07-11-04, 05:27 PM   #29
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Uppin This Shyt Damn U All Are Madd Sleepin On This Damn
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Old 07-13-04, 09:32 AM   #30
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Shadow

*im gonna go 2 heaven 4 all the good things i did*
*not commiting crimes and being saved from sins*
/\ Nice opener

*im staying outa trouble and going to that church*
*all my good deeds an praying will pay-off and work*
/\ A nice bar there

*always read the bible and got the cross on my chain*
*i might swear.. but never use the lords name in vein*
/\ Nice again

*im going to heaven.. cuz im good but im not a saint*
*i dont get evrything i pray for no need 4 complaint*
/\ Aight again

*i truely know where im going at the end of my ~live~*
*2 get there im gonna have 2 b unselfish and sacrifice*
/\ True nice bar again

*i go 2 church evry sunday im there right when it starts*
*i cant be a hater.. becuz hate is murder in thy hearts*
/\ Nice biblic word 'thy' well used

*im not going to hell becuz my life would then b a waste*
* i cant go to hell..im a believer and god is making space*
/\ Nice

*i wanna go to heaven but satan will try some retaliation*
*he would lead me to horror, damnation, & devistation*
/\ Nice rhyming

*but if i stay on the right path and stick with the holy lord*
*heaven is were i shall be and with the angels i shall sore*
/\ Nice rhyming again

*im going to heaven cuz i dont fight and im mild tempered*
* im going to heaven.. cuz i beleve and the lord is my shepard*
/\ Nice closer


Limited Edition

A'yo...Heaven or Hell

Death....a stage of life...just part of the path
I speak to myself, reflecting the pains I've had
/\ Nice opener

Heaven or Hell? The question is present in my mind
Hell.....I would deserve it...when it came my time
/\ Good bar this i liked

I am a person..I care for people that I know and love
But I hurt them at the same time for things I've done
/\ Good bar

I live my life for the Lord...but a Devil in motion
But the Bible says my sins are cast into an ocean
/\ Ok line not feelin that much but ok rhyming

I feel that I deserve...to burn in eternal fire
But I wish to be in Heaven...that is my true desire
/\ Nice line

My emotions are confused...I don't know what to expect
Maybe I can try to change my life...I'm not dead yet
/\ Good bar

I go to church.........though not that often at all
I used to pray everynight...but my lifes in a crawl
/\ Na didnt feel this line much

If I ever die by my own hands...where would I end up..?
My best friend says Hell......but wit life I'm fed up
/\ Nice bar good

Well, God will show me the path...everythin has a reason
Maybe it is my destiny......to wonder wit every season
/\ Nice bar

Until the day I die...I may as well to live life well
'Cause until the day actually comes...

...it will be Heaven or Hell...
/\ Good closer

I'm gonn go for Shadow on this purely because i was feelin his slightly more, both had good verses but Ltd Edition wasnt as consistant v/Shadow.

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