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-NERVEZ- 1 16.67%
TheOne 5 83.33%
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Old 06-25-04, 01:09 AM   #16
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nervez i cant vote till i get some more post but when i can vote i will vote for you b\c you put out his fire
 
Old 06-27-04, 01:35 AM   #17
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can we get sum votes plse...............................
 
Old 06-27-04, 03:14 AM   #18
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i liked nervez better cause the other cat was too simple and the punches were weak.

best line: put the fire out with forks bearing hooks.Blaring raps on contact yo fukin lungs collapse.
If u the one then why da fuk u comin in last?Shistee how NERVEZ Gets shit so hiffee,leave u at the bottom of da bay sightseeing
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Old 06-28-04, 07:14 AM   #19
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vote.............................................. ............
 
Old 07-01-04, 05:43 PM   #20
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From: A place where u need to rap to keep ur head in the game.....itz fucked an everywhere i go i'm put inta a frame....rappin setz me bak an setz me free.....if u niggaz really new me....u just might be able to see
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cmon ppl wherez the votez on this battle? lemme rightfully win kuz no1 kan follow his ass an lets get on wit this
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Old 07-01-04, 06:01 PM   #21
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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132754

Vote the weak mafucka on my thread because He think I prewrite so fuck it I wanna let him have it so please vote and give him a pussy win....

Ayo I'll hit ya'll with a honest vote if you do this...=(
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Old 07-01-04, 06:18 PM   #22
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i cant vote yet but ill provide feedback. One came strong with decent punches. his structure was really good, flow was decent but it lacked mutlis. nerves used played swing-and-miss cliche punches. his structure was piss-poor, and because it was poorly layed out it ruined his flow and made it hard to read. nerves, you really got to work on personals, rather then the overused "ima kill you bitch/yo momma!" type crap



nuff said
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Old 07-01-04, 07:00 PM   #23
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The One took this for a better verse but quit with the..

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structure its newbish you want it to flow like this..

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it all flows same for you nervez..
pz.
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Old 07-01-04, 10:21 PM   #24
-NERVEZ-
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get rid of that vote please............................................ ..........
 
Old 07-02-04, 01:57 PM   #25
Miss. Lyricist
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Hate to be a bitch but-

This battle was fucked up.... Horrible, horrible. One more time: horrible.

rhymes- both were forced, but TheOne had it
structure- TheOne, though I liked neither
multies- tie, neither of you had em
word play- neithe of yah
overall: it was every rappers nightmare

Both of y'all seriously need to work on y'all personals and punches... But my vote has to TheOne, by a hair.
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