i think poinons flow, structure, and everything was better. BUT, you need your punchlines to be more directed. I felt tha boi that nerves punch's was more personal maybe, and directed it to ya a lil better. So my vote goes to -NERVEZ-

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vote please............................................ ..........

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damn poisen when this one over i wanna rematch.............

you wanna lose again, cuz next time ima come hard.

my vote goes to poison cause i felt his punches hit harder i dont feel like breakin this shit down at 5 30 in tha fuckin mourning well i voted here go drop a vote on me vs the one and me vs rapmaster i didnt feel like gettin tha link

vote ill return tha favor................................

vote ill return tha favor............................................

vote on this.....................................one more

intell i give u this one cuase you had better punchlines verses was good to

[QUOTE=the metaphor]ipoison i give u this one cuase you had better punchlines verses was good to overall flow was good some body
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