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Old 06-25-04, 05:25 AM   #1
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Insane!
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a cancerous form has takin storm on my head like the war on terrorism
I like this line alot, I'm sure alot of people can relate. Keep up the good work!
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Old 06-24-04, 08:26 PM   #2
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haha im a ladies man even on the internet...this is what my pist me off about DeLeon, kid posessed skill, no need to bite. But ah well..thanks for feedback
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Old 06-25-04, 03:49 AM   #3
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Originally Posted by Apotheosis

A Man and His Words.

Deadly Vision
Scattered and broken dreams, it matters not tho it seems..
Writers block is just a prism of battered unfocused beams..

The Great Harold

A 1000 screwed up papers, clogging up my bin,
Because my attempts at brainstorms, are nothing but mere wind.

Anticipating the moment, of golden lecture that I write,
Ruined my Monday afternoon so much, it’s now Wednesday night.

Its beyond now a fight, it’s a point I need to prove,
That I can take poetry in motion, and actually make it move.


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"You guys are ill"-is what u shud be saying.

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that was hot Harold keep it comin'!


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without a doubt you are the best poet on this site no doubt in my mine or ne1 elses i should think

and im serious i really mean this you should really keep that shit commin



this is u u lite up the poet comeption*


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I was feeling Harold, the whole piece was tight though. I liked it no doubt.
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Old 06-25-04, 03:51 AM   #4
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I shudda changed that brainstorm lines to...

as my attempts...rather than because.
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Old 06-25-04, 06:03 AM   #5
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yeah i liked dat line i liked da whole thing pc
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Old 06-25-04, 03:31 PM   #6
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Fosho thnx
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