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gods son 5 55.56%
damaged1 4 44.44%
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Old 06-22-04, 10:05 AM   #16
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i think gods son had this.damages verse was played out rhymes bout him bein his daddy.i kno u can up wit good punches so jus think more int he future battles.damage u need work on strucutre so ur lines arent stretched out.and work on personals and flow. gods son not bad better punches. most werent that great but its aight u had a good strucutre and good flow but some of ur lines were stretched.close battle but im gona go wit gods son cause he had harder punches

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Old 06-22-04, 10:30 AM   #17
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opener: gods son
punches: damage
flow: gods son
multies: gods son
closer: damage

overall: gods son (close battler but weak..feel me)
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Old 06-22-04, 10:47 AM   #18
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yo, i was feelin gods son a little more

damaged1-good all a round battle, i little more on da punches and u woulda got ma vote

god son-appelead a little more
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Old 06-22-04, 10:49 AM   #19
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wasnt this battle closed?
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Old 06-22-04, 11:45 AM   #20
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yea but the votes were messed up they didnt explain them well enough..i dunno i was surprised it was open too
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Old 06-22-04, 11:54 AM   #21
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Nicely done by both of you. I could read both verses and didnt get lost. Good job. But in a battle only one person can win. I wish I could vote for both but I cant. My vote goes to Damaged1 he came harder and had more punches. God Son keep it up man you got talent! PEACE
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Old 06-22-04, 11:59 AM   #22
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SHit I fucked up... I read Damaged1's verse thinkin it was God Sons... so lemme fix it I meant I voted God Son but Damaged1 had talent and did a nice job. I do not know how I got confused prolly cuz I am tried but anyways my vote goes to God SOn. Nice Job
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Old 06-22-04, 12:24 PM   #23
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Im gonna have to go with Damaged on this one. His structure was better, flows and rhymez too. Overall, he did a better job that Gods.

God, work on your structure. Make sure that your lines have the same amount of syllables or at least make them close, otherwise the rhymes will be off. Rap outloud.

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Old 06-22-04, 01:49 PM   #24
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damaged got this.. even though he made his font smaller so his lines didnt look stretched.. still he merked the other guy.. better punches and flow go to damaged.. and so does my vote
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Old 06-22-04, 01:56 PM   #25
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.... ok one more vote and it's a rap
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Old 06-22-04, 03:28 PM   #26
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Damaged1
dont put the periods around the words that rhyme...it gets really annoying...structure wasnt good...most of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the wackness ur structure had...u had some metas...a few of ur lines had wordplay...but where the hell r ur punches...i dont wanna read about u killin people wit gats and puttin them into caskets...those arent punches...only 2 of ur lines had punches...u had 1 personal as well...

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dont put the ** and the - - around ur words...thats newbish...so drop that shit...structure wasnt good...all of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchness....u had tight metas...wordplay was also pretty tight...u had a few punches...and i saw 1 personal...

Overall
both had a wack structure...and a wack flow...both also had 2 punches, and one personals...Gods son had way more metas...and way better wordplay...so basing off of that...Gods son gets my vote in this close battle...

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