aiight both of u had decent verses, sparsin, ya opener was pretty good, but the last line of ya second bar didnt have enough syllibles, also some parts of ya rhyme i didnt understand, but u do got skill dog u aint wak.
eclipse, your opener was a bit weak, but like that other nigga said, u picked up well afta that. the adam line was hot i actually laughed when i read that, also ur finish was pretty good. ima give this one to eclipse.

Vote- Eclipse

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[b]Yo is this that nigga from Orignal RB......if so what up man this is Unbroken


I'ma go with Eclipse on this one, to be honest Eclipse I wasn't really feel'n the opener and some of the shit after that, fortunatly about half way through you really picked it up, the adam line was tight, your flow was kinda choppy but I read the first drop not the edited one.

Sparsin you need to work on your punches, get creative with them, your flow was okay but your punches were weak.

Cause of better punches that hit harder this one goes to Eclipse.

v/ecipse

SparSin- Excellent flow, I could feel it all the way out, nice rhymes, I liked the ending.

Eclipse- You started out strong, but I lost you dawg, so I'm gonna give the W

Winner- Sparsin

eclpise dawg u got this spar dawg u good but didnt come like in our battle su came pretty hard but i gotta give this to eclipse he won by more punches
v/eclipse no hate in this vote just speakin the truth

return the favor
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hey man good battle eclipse you got ya KO, but check out my AUDIO wit tempa in my sig... peace dog take it easy

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Lyrical Arson By....

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so this shit closes and he gets his win, good battle dog, hey check out my first audio if ya got time but dont just right down winner and vote explain what we need to work on, or if ya couldnt understand shit... c what im sayin peace..
battles in my SIG

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ok this battle goes to eclipse nice punches....sparsin work on your vocab...
and be witty with the words...and be more personal...because personals win battles...
flow and structure was even..but eclipse gets the creativty and punches...

vote/e
for having harder hitting punches...
this was just a newbie battle....both need to to elevate....im just playin
props to vote...keep it up...

i mean props to both....my bad...dont let me discourage you all.....
after all.....this is a newbie battle....just playin.....