Alright thanx for the advice..yeah its my first battle im still learning but still uppin

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Yo come on keep votin, we just needa couple more

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hoops won this battle was it was pretty close it could of went to either of them some of his lyrics were stronger though repay the favor though by voting here if u would please

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=131479

^^^ Yo that shouldnt couldnt dude didnt even explain his vote

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both ya'lls shit seemed average

hoops came with the metas but his flow was sketchy
i would usually say he won cuz he started off pretty tite.

n spitas was decent through it, but the rip at the end for spita got him, no his flow was on.

vote. spita

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but i dont have 20 posts n it wont let me vote so i dunno if that will count, if it does my vote is spita

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aight UPPIN yall.. avoid posting your vote if you have really low posts.. from this point on i mean.. 4-3.. UPPIN for the win

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Proud OYD member again . <------- That is whassup

yo, Hoops starte doff bangin wit that......
spitaflame? na you not gassed, i'll take the F outcha name/
follow instructions and you'll see me beating this Spitting-Lame/
I was feelin it, but the rest of the ryhme fell off, and wouldn't have made since if he ain't explain. his flow fell off and it should have been easier to understand..... Spita Flame had a couple of good hits, but the rest was aight and since he was more consistant I guess he took it

winner..... SpitaFlame

At the beginning, I wasnt feeling Hoops verse, but as continued to read on, his lines became better and better. He did'nt word most of his lines right and I guess thats why he had to explain shit but it was still good. I dont look for structure cuz thats the stupidest shit ever so fuck it. I looked at his punches and they made me laugh a lil. him dumb ass explanation for his last bar was funny ass hell to though. his word play was ok aswell. His punchlines were good at the middle.
SpitFlame did'nt come hard enough in this battle. It was still ok, but just not enough to get my vote. He lacked personals and good punchlines. the prayer shit was ok, it just needed better word play.
V/Hoops

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figure I could drop by and promote my my first mixtape and what not since im here..