yung tech...u came out weak from da start of da whole shit. your rhymes were way too simple and blaq ink already played out a line about Tyson so ya shouldnt do it...u were just flat out weak.
my vote goes to blaq ink

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uppin for votez some fair shit tho i think these nigga be hatein....lol......any way it dont matter i aint mad...so letz get some votez up in here
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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

uppin ..uppin ..uppin ..uppin.. uppin.. upin.. uppin... uppin !!!!!votes votes votes votes votes votes

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serial killah, da kidz call me captain crunch

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

aight both were dry for something that should flow but black ink had funnier punches and personals

return tha favor

uppin 4 votes its tied up now 2-2
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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

Ink - aaah not bad.... you could have done better on this battle it was a close battle but i think both of ya need a lil work on how u set up ur punches...

Tekk - Nice shit but still not tha best that i've read u could have done better on this battle... Nice closer...

Overall Thoughts - Tekk and Ink could improve their punches by buildin they structure more like

Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah HIT-YA// << Set up for tha punch!
Blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah blah SHIP-YA// << Add a lot of multies a lot of wordplay 2...

And Ink woulda won this battle but he stretched his bars way 2 much and his structure sucked he had some good word play...

Tekk u need some work on word play and punches...

Weak battles guys real weak...

Vote: Tekk

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Return tha favor guys i judged fair i think u should do tha same...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=132257

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

Both of you sucked, plain and simple.

Y'all need to work on your flow. Both of you need to make sure your syllables match in your bar. The flow is ruptured when one line has more syllables that the line it's supposed to rhyme with.

Both of you need to work on your personals. The punches were weak and you had me yawning. Blaq, I see potential in your spit, just work on the flow and your vocab.

vote/Blaq

Please vote on my battle vs. Hoops, if you have 100+ posts

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i dont 100+pionts...sorry
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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees

uppin for som votez niggaz......................
i'll return a fair vote on one of ya battles

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yall niggaz just like the u.s.army bein all u can be
but u fuckin wit the king so show respect and bow 2 ya knees