2 points

deleon +femcee u r d/r ink and each other
yu both voted 4 him in mine +scriptives battles

2nd even if i hate voted ...wot u gona do remove the vote?
he fed..coz thats the only way he had a gud verse
thats a d/q

i don't even know whats going on here...you all saying i got d/r votes. only cos he fed... he can't make up a real verse sp he has to feed offf mine...

Upppinnnnnnnnnnnn

Scriptive
you think your good, this is where you get ink poisoned, ink-
your a gay faggot, his faveourite band is n-sync-
kinda funny. pretty simple. 5/10
why you come up hating in my thread saying you the best-
my name is scriptive and your my unwelcome guest-
kinda filler wit personal. 3/10
ill take out my glock, pump 5 slugs into your head-
you skinny fuck ill snap you like pencil lead-
again. funny. but simple. 4/10
your unknown in this world your never going to make it-
i could kill your so easy just like lickety split-
good personal. 6/10
this is where the crowd get all exited "ink's gonna choke"-
he's gonna black out fall on the floor and have a stroke-
blah. 4/10
i think im about done with this bitch ass wigga-
your never coming back to this fool, ive just pulled the trigger-
u called urself a fool. 1/10
You punched yourself in your last line. Other wise this was an OK verse. The main problem was it's simplicity. The punches weren't really that creative. Just no OH's or AH's in it.Ok Job tho.
23/60

Ink
why your text dont even flow, their just complete nonsense...
...only ILL review your verse would get, is ILLigiterate contents /1
u fed off his drop. 1/10
you dont make sense, why be independent when you could have simply just bit...
complete feed. straight quote. lmao. 1/10
why you think im skinny, do you have to be so judgemental ?.. ( one tear falls )
...and why you rappin bout pumpin glocks, you just a thug rental /3
he called u a skinny fuck. all u did was feed again. 1/10
i dont wanna put up wit your shit no more , my rhyme is through...
...im sick of educating this herban(urban) dude, now back to tie my shoe /4
the urban part was ok. u were tie'in your shoe? 3/10
Make your own verse. Simple as that. All you did was feed off of Scripts punches tords you. That's not how it works. You'll learn that thru a loss.
6/40

Vote/Scripture

Hit up the battle's in my sig wit honest votes. Thanks.

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