WARNING: This vote is not a reflection of how good you are
...but a reflection of how good you were to the other battle

Young Dez-
ok opener... 1st line a little stretched compared to 2nd... 5/10

a little more w/p and this bar would have been ok... 4/10

a little personal... needs better structure... 4/10

not really doin anything to him... bad punch... 3/10

2nd line a little stretched compared to 1st startin to slack off in punch... 3/10

ok closer but stretched 2nd... 4/10


*The-Star*-
some ok vocab and w/p good opener... 7/10

ok r/s alrite flow ... 6/10

good r/s good flow a bit of punch...7/10

ok punch needed better w/p on the 2nd... 6/10

good closer closer 2nd a little stretched... 6/10


overall- The-Star had a better structure...eg word/play and rhyme/scheme
...the punchlines were ok too

vote- The-Star

peace...

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star won this with better punches and a good flow..young dez ur flow was off and ur punches didnt hit hard, some of ur lines were too short and some stretched..no hate
v/the star

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