Structure: Charlemagne your structure was a little all over the place. Im not sure whats up with the numbers that always throws me off. You had a few streched out lines, that seemed like you were trying to force them. Datruth, very nice structure the verse was put together well, and was more appealing to the eye.

Flow: I wasnt really feelin ya flow too much Charlemagne, a few of the streched out lines just threw it off. Datruth your flow was on point, a verse with good structure is usually much easier to read, as was the case here.

Open: Charlemagne your opener was pretty hot, if you woulda came that hard the whole battle you coulda won. Datruth your opener was straight too but it wasnt as hard as his.

Close: Charlemagne you also closed your battle well, saying the battle is historical. Datruth just told you to go sit in the corner, lol so he got you there.

Punches: Charlemagne your first line was a nice punch. It seemed like you didnt throw that many punches, you were just using too many fillers. Datruth you had quite a few punches, and they was hittin hard, liked the closer about putting him in the corner.

Multis: I noticed Charlemagne was attempting a few multis in there. While i wasnt seeing any from datruth, although he did switch his rhyme scheme up a couple times

Personals: No personals from either of you

V/Datruth...his punches were just hittin harder, and there were more of them.