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Unfortunate 4 44.44%
Datruth29 5 55.56%
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Old 07-02-04, 11:05 PM   #16
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yo this wasnt even close in my eyes unfortunate had it from top to bottom even though that line was messed up he still won overall ddatruth keep elavating and i might battle you my self

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Old 07-02-04, 11:44 PM   #17
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ok datruth29 look first of all i didnt like your opener at all, you had an extended line, and that didnt make sence at all really, you kept talking about the same shite to like lip teath and shit like that i jsut wasnt feellin it


ok unfortuante look your opener was their on the spot i like it alot,then the next couple lines were good but the one with puffy and masin i didnt get so i got to let you know your closer was good, it understand it and everything(lol my sister use to do that to) ok well you got my vote

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Old 07-02-04, 11:52 PM   #18
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ok datruth29 look first of all i didnt like your opener at all, you had an extended line, and that didnt make sence at all really, you kept talking about the same shite to like lip teath and shit like that i jsut wasnt feellin it


ok unfortuante look your opener was their on the spot i like it alot,then the next couple lines were good but the one with puffy and masin i didnt get so i got to let you know your closer was good, it understand it and everything(lol my sister use to do that to) ok well you got my vote

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Old 07-02-04, 11:54 PM   #19
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lmfao i think he was laughing at what that kid said well at least that what i hope
 
Old 07-03-04, 12:08 AM   #20
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that wasnt my vote kid

datruth-your verse was okay.....wasnt really feeling your verse that much.....punches was played and you concepts was weak.....punches didt hit that hard and kinda fell off.....structure was okay aswell as your flow.....elevate a little bit and shit should be good

Un-your verse was okay.......your structurew was working for you aswell as your flow that was on point........punches hit hard and stuck allthought you could reword them so that they hit harder but other then that your shit was good

keep it up

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Old 07-03-04, 12:21 AM   #21
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unfortunate came harder..better punches and flow, datruth nice spit i jus feel he came harder and had betta punches..nice battle tho
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Old 07-03-04, 12:25 AM   #22
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IIght here it goes..now this might hurt y'all but this battle was wack..haha..first off..None y'all had personals..thats a big no no..you need punches and personals to win ..we all know you can rhyme..now thetruth you had a wack beginning one part didnt rhyme maybe i read it wrong tho..very choppy too..same with unfortunate except he had more multis and it was funnier..but keep eleavtin and work your flow cuz you guys didnt really have any..but my vote goes to...


























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Old 07-25-04, 12:24 PM   #23
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uppin for mature votes please
 
Old 07-29-04, 02:51 AM   #24
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ok this was a nice close battle i liked it alot nice shit ya
Da truth
u had a nice structure and nice complexity some nice multis and some okay punches they really were kinda simple you had good wordplay and jus a nice drop but you could of came harder with the punches and that would of helped you out alot

Unfor
you had a nice drop 2 good complexity but ya structure was kinda stretched and that fucked up the whole flow from flowing smoothly and easily you had nice wordplay i liked some of the vocab that you put in ya verse ya punches jus overall hit harder than ya comp so there for Unfor gets my vote due to better wordplay and overall better punches
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