uppi

This battle was pretty tight I was feelin both of the verses.

You got toubles with me? Well tell me so I can solve ‘em
Nigga your throat is ‘questionable’, and I’ll be solvin the problem
This was a weak opener.....2/10
Being around me is dangerous, nigga im claimin
That you’ll never be safe, like fat kids runnin bases
I think ive heard this before but its tight 5/10
Homos who hate this, will get a broken jaw
Cuz you stayed up all night, just to stick your dick in the crack of dawn
I kinda of understand this, but its not that hard... 3/10
When it comes to this rap thing, your just a lost cause
You guns clap? Well mine to, and im about to give you ‘a round of applause’
This was your best punch I liked this 6/10
your not hot, your wackness keeps on doublin
Cuz your just ‘fucking stupid’, like jessica simpson’s husband
Jessicas husband is stupid??? 1/10

17/50

What was that, at that rate you never will Sell Records/
Bonce couldn't "drop no hot shit" if he lived eating on Bell Peppers/
not the best opener, but good 2nd line meta 4/10
I got more bars than jail cellars, and you really ain't about shit/
I read your last flow, you're more worn out than yo outfit/
jails have cellars? 3/10
I doubt this man can beat me, I turn the heat up like an arsonist/
I wanna urinate on him so bad that my dick's clogged, n it's hard ta piss/
you turned the heat up, but you wana piss on him? 5/10
I'm fin to hit you with some shit that'll rip you without pistols/
you talk bout guns but the only time you held lead, was a pencil/
Was a lil feeding here i wasnt feelin it much 2/10
I carry stripes like Zebra's and I thought that I should jus teach ya/
you win? i'll be pissed....
coz yo stucture's more off than the leaning Twoer of Pizza.......
not a good closer..but good meta 4/10

18/50

v/datruth

sayin someone is fucking stupid...jessica simpson husband fucks her, shes stupid...so hes fucking stupid...

if you woulda understood that i would've got the vote...thats gay

Naw, I Doubt That You Would Of Still Got The Vote Though.....

he did the 17/50

you got 18/50

he gave me 1 for that cuz he didnt understand it..

it would have AT LEAST been a 3

which adds up to 19/50

uppin this...

gosh, i hate this 50 characters thing

upping again

Structure: Tie
Flow: Tie
Personals: Truth
Punches: Tie
Openor: The truth
Closer: Da truth
Vote: Truth

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Weak battle, but truth takes it barely, just cuz bodo had some gay ass lines...

Bodo- Your opener was gay and didn't made sense, which took away from your verse. You had some weak, played punches that didn't hit. You didn't really have any personals, and your closer was gay. The only good thing you did was your struc, but everything else sucked. Wack verse.

Datruth- Your verse also was pretty bad. Your first four lines were pretty good, but then it fell off from there, rapidly. You had some punches that missed completely, and you also didn't really have any personals. Your wordplay and flow was better, and your struc was aight, so you get my vote. Elevate tho.