aight hmm..

Original.. ya flow was aight.. had some decent punches in there.. i would like to see you focus on ya flow tho.. it wasent the best, but it worked i guess.. lines were a little streched.. structure was aight <-- streching didnt help it...


vitton:flow was good.. but you lacked hard hittin punches.. you had a name play, and gunplay.. but it didnt hit hard foreal at all..

i would say orijinal won this dueto his punches..
v/orig

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134057
^jot up that battle with a Honest vote.. thanks

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Honestly I think you both could've came harder. Louis, you had average structure and flow.. fair punches.. probably could've hit harder.. I think O's barrage of personals made his punches stronger than yours.. O also had decent structure and flow.. I'ma go with Orij.. much respect to both of ya tho..

vote/Orijinal


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dayummmm this battle was tyt ill try to vote later on iight PEACEEEEEEE

structure - orijional
flow - orijional
punches - orijional
metaz - orijional
wordplay- orijional
creativity- orijional
opener - louis ( orijinal was good but it wasnt lies)
closer - orijinal

v - orijinal

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=134062