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07-09-04, 03:00 PM
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Datruth29
structure is good...flow is on target...no metas...wordplay is pretty good...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... EyeDentdy dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...that newbish...but anywho...structure is good...flow falls off a lil cause u had a few stretched lines...no metas...wordplay is decent...a few of ur punches connected...ok personals... Overall EyeDentdy had more personals...neither had metas...both had a good structure...Datruth29 had the more stable flow...better wordplay...and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...DaTruth29 gets my vote... VOTE - DATRUTH29 PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the link in my sig...thanx... |
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07-09-04, 09:17 PM
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IP: 6CFE 1779
Yeah, this one was pretty much one sided....
Datruth came with some OK punches and a few even stuck. None really stood out and a few were pretty played, but I guess it was an OK verse. His flow wasn't bad and he had a little wit behind his punches. Overall, I guess it was a solid verse. You need to elevate a little though. Come up with some original concepts... Eyedentity was pretty much wack in this one. He had a hard time rhyming and his flow was off in a few places. He didn't really have any wit behind his punches and he pretty much sucked. I think you need to start over and learn how to rhyme and structure your verse.... Vote - Datruth |
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