http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133094
Hit this up, I'm gettin' fuckin' screwed over here.

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

Thanks to those who have voted. Much respect.


Aside from that, uppin' for votes.

STRYPE:THOUGHT YOUR VERSE WAS GOOD FLOWING N HAD ALOT OF ELEMENTS,PUNCHES,MULTI'S,SO ON IT WAS DEFFINATLY THE BETTER VERSE
HOT:NOT A BAD VERSE BUT I DON'T THINK YOUR FIRST 4 LINES WORKED IN YOUR FAVOUR,IT JUS DINT CATCH MY EYE,YOUR STRUCTURE WAS OFF ALSO,GOOD BATTLE OVERALL THOUGH

VOTE/STRYPE

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...hp?t=135134..mc syx

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...t=134418...MARV

I gotta go wit Strype his punches was like Mike Tyson VS. Oscar de La Hoya he knocked Hot shh tha fuck out... My vote goes to -Strype-

lol STRYPE RAPED U


strype hot shit dawg
wordplay 7/10
flow 9/10
punches HOT 8/10
personals good 8/10
multi nice 7/10
meta 7/10

hotshh
wordplay 6/10
flow 5/10
punches 6/10
personals 6/10
multi 4/10
meta 5/10


strype murdered u fam..never rap again LOL

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uppin for 1 more vote, hopefully..

where ya'll at?

my vote gotta go to strype...better structure and an alround better and nicer verse to read. the punches were realy hitting and he displayed good vocab

hot.. your ish was good infact if was very good for a newb but u were out match by strype elevate and u might take him next time

vote strype

return da favour
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=133850

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