IIght heres some honesty----

Dim- Your verse had the structure of a cat who does audio- Your fault- It aint aint a text verse, your punches were basic - the art of war line was iight- it had some word play- I'd say you'd be classified vet on some sites but not this one-- my text kills this shit. the elevate off uppercuts was o.k but nothin special as far as text goes- you gotta improve ya structure and make it easy for someone to read cuz you right people are retarted but we live in a real world you gotta convince us not the other way around.

L.I- Your verse was pretty decent- you came harder with your punches and wordplay- every line was quick and to the point with a decent punch or a setup- this was a text verse with none of the crazy boldness and squigly lines and shit for punch designation so it was easier on the eyes and easier to flow with.... Vote L.I

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