Aight heres the breakdown...

punch both..you guys both had punches that hit hard..good shit
flow - State Capitol ..no doubt structure was great too
opener state- SC ... a nice first line about the pencil...
closer Lethal...you did have the weak meta about the cars with no gear..
complexity - both
multis - Both
enjoyable State capitol..Weapons lethal, Your wackness has Been Exposed, Like The Media And Gay-people..
hahaha

vote ...sc

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Face Defeat, Treat My Gun Like A Pencil, turn it around and erase-this-geek..
Lines Aint Phrase-in-me,Im Ontop, your status is where my base-ment-be..
not bad opener...
Lethal's 6-0, Kids Like An Overweight Vegetarian, He Only Eats Herbs..
This Bitch can't get a girl, only action you get is when you scream verbs..
nice punch...
u Aint Shine-in-kid, Road To Success Kine-da-dim, plus the fact ur letters glow in-ur-sig..
You spit Rhymes-of-sins (bad rhymes), Tried Out For dreamcast and got declined-a-gen
ehh not bad..
Your Lines, I hit the back-space, kids white but fire lines will leave you with a black-face..
Leave your ass-baked, You Attract-fakes, bars aint affectin' me like You Rapped-blanks..
nice...
Merk Lethal, we far from equal, Make sure you don't make it to the final Seq-uel..
Weapons lethal, Your wackness has Been Exposed, Like The Media And Gay-people..
Nice punch..
your end-is-here, Your done now that your moms not here, to defend-your-rear..
your Mos' Def losin here, you aint goin nowhere like cars with no-gears..
haha nice closer..

Of course this is non of my business but how do you live this
Not even the famous D.R of RB can cure my pure sickness *
Not that bad.. but not amazing
This bitch thinks he can be like me, just cuz he quoted Jay-Z
The one that stopped him was a lethal diseased emcee which was me
i wasnt really feelin this line...
This bitch is so fruity he falls more times than the Niagara falls **
I came to destroy each State Capitol so I’m gonna annihilate all
not bad at all..
You came out of 9 oh 5 and stepped in 9/11 wit my plans to blow
High jacked the second plane and now aimin for the State Capitol
not bad.. wasnt really feelin it much..
So let the cameras roll, your guest appearing in “faces of death” ***
your garbage, and you are what you eat, so your waste-in-your-breath ****
not bad.. good punch
This cat thinks he’s hard cuz his scull is actually as thick as wood *****
He’s just shooked cuz he got hit wit a open shot like a pussy would
nice closer..

Overall i wasnt really feelin Lethals..i thought it was alright.
State i believe had the better verse.. soo my vote goes to him..

Kil- I mean State Capitol...
Face Defeat, Treat My Gun Like A Pencil, turn it around and erase-this-geek..
Lines Aint Phrase-in-me,Im Ontop, your status is where my base-ment-be..
^nice multis but uhmm doesn't the first line say in more than 1 way that u'll kill urself..
sry i noticed that first.. ha ha.. ha ha..

u Aint Shine-in-kid, Road To Success Kine-da-dim, plus the fact ur letters glow in-ur-sig..
You spit Rhymes-of-sins (bad rhymes), Tried Out For dreamcast and got declined-a-gen
^ ur best lines.. ha ha nice punch, really..
*structurewise- okay, not too fucked up... *Wordplay- not bad *Vocab- alright..
overall: you didn't come too hard and fell off towards the end with the mama part..

Lethal Lunatic-
This cat thinks he’s hard cuz his scull is actually as thick as wood *****
He’s just shooked cuz he got hit wit a open shot like a pussy would
^ lol lol rofl lol... nice closer! ha ha

So let the cameras roll, your guest appearing in “faces of death” ***
your garbage, and you are what you eat, so your waste-in-your-breath ****
^ anotha good line, hee hee...
*opener: didn't stick to me at all... but i was feelin' how u started calm and started jappin' later.. ha ha *wordplay: good *vocab: both u and him the same..
*structure: you got that over him..

my vote: Lethal Lunatic both were funny but i felt LL punches flying and hitting his target State Capitol>urs wasn't bad but LL just came harder spillin' the truth..

LL> nice win
holla @ me when i get sum challengers.. (i have no open battles currently)
~wun~

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Face Defeat, Treat My Gun Like A Pencil, turn it around and erase-this-geek..
Lines Aint Phrase-in-me,Im Ontop, your status is where my base-ment-be..
pretty good opener but arent you shooting your self since your turnin you gun around?
Lethal's 6-0, Kids Like An Overweight Vegetarian, He Only Eats Herbs..
This Bitch can't get a girl, only action you get is when you scream verbs..
pretty good punchline...
u Aint Shine-in-kid, Road To Success Kine-da-dim, plus the fact ur letters glow in-ur-sig..
You spit Rhymes-of-sins (bad rhymes), Tried Out For dreamcast and got declined-a-gen
not a bad punchlines but seen alot better
Your Lines, I hit the back-space, kids white but fire lines will leave you with a black-face..
Leave your ass-baked, You Attract-fakes, bars aint affectin' me like You Rapped-blanks..
Good line but seen alot better
Merk Lethal, we far from equal, Make sure you don't make it to the final Seq-uel..
Weapons lethal, Your wackness has Been Exposed, Like The Media And Gay-people..
One of your best lines
your end-is-here, Your done now that your moms not here, to defend-your-rear..
your Mos' Def losin here, you aint goin nowhere like cars with no-gears..
good closer best line out oof the whole verse

LL
Of course this is non of my business but how do you live this
Not even the famous D.R of RB can cure my pure sickness *
nice opener
This bitch thinks he can be like me, just cuz he quoted Jay-Z
The one that stopped him was a lethal diseased emcee which was me
pretty nice line good so far
This bitch is so fruity he falls more times than the Niagara falls **
I came to destroy each State Capitol so I’m gonna annihilate all
Lol..one of your best lines
You came out of 9 oh 5 and stepped in 9/11 wit my plans to blow
High jacked the second plane and now aimin for the State Capitol
not a bad line good punchlines...and personal
So let the cameras roll, your guest appearing in “faces of death” ***
your garbage, and you are what you eat, so your waste-in-your-breath ****
hot line lol..one of your best
This cat thinks he’s hard cuz his scull is actually as thick as wood *****
He’s just shooked cuz he got hit wit a open shot like a pussy would
good closer nice shyt

punchlines:LL
multies:State
personals:LL
flow:LL
enjoy:Tie
Meta:Tie
Overall :Lethal Lunatic

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Lyrics
One Man Crew
Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me
Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me
And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising
Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing
Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud
And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud

Nice battle all aorund...lethal..i liuked ur punches....they really worked out in this battle..youhad some good vocab...and wordplay...sturc..was ok...and the multies..were ok....now for...state...nasty verse...it was mad good...the sturc was really good..the vocab was good,,,wordplay was really good..and ya vocab...was sick..and teh multies..u used...was very good..nice personals both of ya..but i felt..state..more...ight...no more d/r votes..iigt

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Wasnt Goin To Vote On This At First Cool With Both Emcees But I can Use The Money Lol

State...State State State.............................State.lol

You

Ripped

This Shit..LOl Nice Drop Not The Best You Done But Tight

Lethal Also Nice Drop feelin Yo verse Also

Opener



Face Defeat, Treat My Gun Like A Pencil, turn it around and erase-this-geek..
Lines Aint Phrase-in-me,Im Ontop, your status is where my base-ment-be..

9.6/10

Of course this is non of my business but how do you live this
Not even the famous D.R of RB can cure my pure sickness *

Nice Personas But No Punch ehh....8.6/10

Bestline

Lethal's 6-0, Kids Like An Overweight Vegetarian, He Only Eats Herbs..
This Bitch can't get a girl, only action you get is when you scream verbs..

hahahahahahhahaha 10/10

So let the cameras roll, your guest appearing in “faces of death” ***
your garbage, and you are what you eat, so your waste-in-your-breath

NiCe 9/10

Closer

your end-is-here, Your done now that your moms not here, to defend-your-rear..
your Mos' Def losin here, you aint goin nowhere like cars with no-gears..

Lol Damnn 9.6/10

This cat thinks he’s hard cuz his scull is actually as thick as wood *****
He’s just shooked cuz he got hit wit a open shot like a pussy would

8.5/10

Clearly State Took This But NiCe Battle Lethal Work On Sum Punches Not Jus All personals

V/State

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State CapiTol:
Face Defeat, Treat My Gun Like A Pencil, turn it around and erase-this-geek..
Lines Aint Phrase-in-me,Im Ontop, your status is where my base-ment-be..
^good use of multies...no hard-hitting punch though...

Lethal's 6-0, Kids Like An Overweight Vegetarian, He Only Eats Herbs..
This Bitch can't get a girl, only action you get is when you scream verbs..
^played out...

u Aint Shine-in-kid, Road To Success Kine-da-dim, plus the fact ur letters glow in-ur-sig..
You spit Rhymes-of-sins (bad rhymes), Tried Out For dreamcast and got declined-a-gen
^personal...yes...stretched as fuck...you needa shorten these lines down...too long=they don't hit as hard

Your Lines, I hit the back-space, kids white but fire lines will leave you with a black-face..
Leave your ass-baked, You Attract-fakes, bars aint affectin' me like You Rapped-blanks..
Blanks~face don't rhyme...your more focused about multies than you are about ur actual disses...

Merk Lethal, we far from equal, Make sure you don't make it to the final Seq-uel..
Weapons lethal, Your wackness has Been Exposed, Like The Media And Gay-people..
^decent...

your end-is-here, Your done now that your moms not here, to defend-your-rear..
your Mos' Def losin here, you aint goin nowhere like cars with no-gears..
^weak metaphor...

Lethal Lunatic:
Of course this is non of my business but how do you live this
Not even the famous D.R of RB can cure my pure sickness *
^not hard hitting...it is a personal tho...

This bitch thinks he can be like me, just cuz he quoted Jay-Z
The one that stopped him was a lethal diseased emcee which was me
^nope...atleast a personal tho

This bitch is so fruity he falls more times than the Niagara falls **
I came to destroy each State Capitol so I’m gonna annihilate all
^nah...atleast a personal tho...

You came out of 9 oh 5 and stepped in 9/11 wit my plans to blow
High jacked the second plane and now aimin for the State Capitol
^no...9/11 punches=played

So let the cameras roll, your guest appearing in “faces of death” ***
your garbage, and you are what you eat, so your waste-in-your-breath ****
^nah...weak...

This cat thinks he’s hard cuz his scull is actually as thick as wood *****
He’s just shooked cuz he got hit wit a open shot like a pussy would
^nah...its decent...but not good

Overall:...State capitol did use a lot of multies...but with stretched as fucked lines...they don't roll off the tip of your tongue when you read em...which really hurt that. Both didn't come with strong battle verses...but Lethal did have personals which does make his verse stronger.

/v- Lethal...barely won this.

Return the favour both of you, and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature. Thank You.

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wow...nigga sed my herbs line was played...never heard that shit once....hmmmmmm

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^U didn't make a nice flip of the concept. I've heard to many lines like that...shit...even in my older battles, i've used a line like that. You gotta come with fresh shit so that readers are like "dam..." u can't just throw simple references around...make dudes think a lil.

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state capitol :

Face Defeat, Treat My Gun Like A Pencil, turn it around and erase-this-geek..
Lines Aint Phrase-in-me,Im Ontop, your status is where my base-ment-be..
^^hot opener sick multies good meta's 9/10
Lethal's 6-0, Kids Like An Overweight Vegetarian, He Only Eats Herbs..
This Bitch can't get a girl, only action you get is when you scream verbs..
^^kinda played but you switched it still good 7/10
u Aint Shine-in-kid, Road To Success Kine-da-dim, plus the fact ur letters glow in-ur-sig..
You spit Rhymes-of-sins (bad rhymes), Tried Out For dreamcast and got declined-a-gen
^^good personals hott punches good bar 8/10
Your Lines, I hit the back-space, kids white but fire lines will leave you with a black-face..
Leave your ass-baked, You Attract-fakes, bars aint affectin' me like You Rapped-blanks.
^^once again sick meta's and multies 9/10
Merk Lethal, we far from equal, Make sure you don't make it to the final Seq-uel..
Weapons lethal, Your wackness has Been Exposed, Like The Media And Gay-people..
^^hot multies again decent punches 7/10
your end-is-here, Your done now that your moms not here, to defend-your-rear..
your Mos' Def losin here, you aint goin nowhere like cars with no-gears..
^^decent closer you said "here" too much tho 6/10

overall : 46/60

lethal lunatic:

Of course this is non of my business but how do you live this
Not even the famous D.R of RB can cure my pure sickness *
^^decent personal but you talked about yourself too much 7/10
This bitch thinks he can be like me, just cuz he quoted Jay-Z
The one that stopped him was a lethal diseased emcee which was me
^^basic 4/10
This bitch is so fruity he falls more times than the Niagara falls **
I came to destroy each State Capitol so I’m gonna annihilate all
^^first line played second line hott 7/10
You came out of 9 oh 5 and stepped in 9/11 wit my plans to blow
High jacked the second plane and now aimin for the State Capitol
^^your hottest bar 10/10
So let the cameras roll, your guest appearing in “faces of death” ***
your garbage, and you are what you eat, so your waste-in-your-breath ****
^^hott punch 8/10
This cat thinks he’s hard cuz his scull is actually as thick as wood *****
He’s just shooked cuz he got hit wit a open shot like a pussy would
^^good meta weak closer weak punch 4/10

overall : 40/60

vote: state capitol

he just came too hard and nice with the multies u had a couple played lines L.L decent verse but your closer should have been hotter thats why its a closer

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