Intensify Effect - Punches was original and creative... nice lyrics over all... aight structure

Mistah Tate - Corny punches yo... Nice structure and flow u had goin, but shit was weak nah mean...

MY VOTE= Intesity Effect

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WHACK MUTHAFUCKAZ NEED TO KILL THA NOIZE....

mt. u had better structure but absolutely no personals and seemed all ya's was jus pre writen could be used on anyone, prolly why ya sturcture was so good.
but ie had bad structure but much more personals, mt prolly better but in this battle ie had more personals and in my opinion takes this one
vote- intensify effect

yo return the favor fo realz
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135903

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my shit was pre-written? you buggin nigga i wrote that in 20 minutes, i had one personal on his name, and i dont know of this nigga so thats the only one i could get.....uppin ^^^^^^

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

mistah tate~damn, some funny lines in there, creative too, flow and structure were good throughout, ya had some good punches as well,good opener too, set upt nicely..overall nice verse
intensity effect: ya verse was decent too, but ya should clean up ya structure, it will help the flow,no hate just bein honest, try and pack more punches into a smaller space too cuz ya words get stretchy...overall good from both
VOTE:MISTAH

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shit heres my link if yall want to drop a vote here:http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=135415

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overall

punches-mistah
flow-intensity
struc-mistah
wordplay-mistah
creativity-intensity

overall i liked intensitys creativeness
but mistah had harder punches
a beta opener........n beta structure

vote-mistah

return the favour guys/...plz
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...134#post1420134

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upp'in for more votes....

this one aint ova yet so dont get gas

come on people a few more decent vote and this one is ova....

whats really good why was this on the 3ed page dont sleep people

jesus christ.......uppin ^^^^^^^^^ vote and leave a good explanation so it wont get dqed, i'll return the favor

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"Lord forgive me, but he tried to kill me, somebody out there gotta feel me."
-Young Buck

yo there is to much post and bearly no votes can we end this already with a few decent votes???

upp'in and dont sleep on my verse people.........
just a few more votes......

leave link and i will return the favor of a vote...

i thought it was an alright battle but ie your punches werent hitting n were pretty straight forward not alot of complexity,tried multi's but your structure was fucked ta follow,jus ya syllable count was off n i don't think some of ya lines rymed,on the other hand i liked ya content n vocab but ya jus dint play off da punches well enough...i was'nt feeling ya closer either...srry dawg...no hate

mt ya verse could use a lil work but w/e ya ryme scheme was there along with personal/structure n flow...you basically took this in all cats.....nice verse
vote/mistah tate
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=138106

upp'in for some more votes.........................................

upp'in.................
for more votes plez........