2h2l, you shouldn't have treated him like he was nothing. Yeah, you used a lot of one syllable words that rhymed, whoopty doo. Your structure was off. Your punches were lame. The only thing decent in that post was your sig graphic.

God of Rap, you had an easy win. Structure was better, punches were better, rhyme scheme was better... everything was better. Luckily for you, you weren't facing anyone.. really hard. Otherwise I would've had to have broken this down farther.

V/ God

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where the sun doesn't shine
Wait for you there
where the shadows run from themselves