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alrite.. the first guy had no structure, some creative ideas, but fuckall structure.. i wasnt feelin the verse very much at all.. you started off with a 2 line bar rhyme scheme, but then u fell off really badly and started riting lines that were all over the place..
i dont think i really need to go through the second verse, it wasnt anythin amazin either, but it beat the shit outta the first one.. thats why its gettin this vote... |
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structure was pretty good...flow was pretty consistent...no multis, as half of ur lines didnt even rhyme...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals... GangsStarshit dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure was pretty good...flow was on lock...no multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals... Overall both had a pretty good structure...both had a consistent flow...neither had multis...neither had good personals...GangsStarshit had better wordplay and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...GangsStarshit had the better overall verse, so he gets my vote... VOTE - GANGSSTARSHIT |
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Gangstarshit what the fuck were u thinkin to challenge me this is like a white guy vsing a street legend G 7/10 Gangstarshit u and rap is like a puzzle that doesnt fit my flows merk u rip ur eyes out and jerk you 7/10 beat u, and laugh at you, i keep tellin u u aint shit but he keeps trying while crying like a little bitch 5/10 i spit acid when i ryme they get u in the eye everytime makin u go blind, ur flows aint no hit, ill tell u what stick ur hand up ur ass 5/10 and maybe ull find better shit, my flowes just ran this poll ill even help u out gimme a shovel and ill dig ur 6foot deep hole 7/10 2 Hard 2 Lose more like 2 Easy 2 abuse/ U'll get slaughtered like Jews or played like a bitch who's easy 2 use/ 8/10 Dawg this is a battle not a case of who's feminine/ U can tell he likes the same type...postin pics of bare chested-men/ 9/10~~~lol~~~ U should consider a name change to 'wanna beat me stand in line'/ Goto a gay bar and see how many men ask for a date... .............................................and a collection time/ 7/10 So please feel free to roam around...movins a make it a lil harder to hit ya/ U got more chance of spittin decent fya at me... .................if u splured it from a flame thrower/ 5/10 Your chances of overcoming this task...none should've allowed feeding/ So u could reflect this verse back...thats ur only chance of succeeding/ 8/10 this came down 2 better wordplay and better punches which went 2 ~~~~~~~~~~Gangsta~~~~~~~~~~~
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2: ya verse was lame, weak punches, off flow n bad structure. gangstar: some decent wordplay, wasnt really feelin ya punches... word to ya ///'s bein newbish, get riddovem... get more personal... get more complex flow-wise... but hey least ya words rhymed... one better than the other guys v/ gangstar
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