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GangsStarshit 5 100.00%
2HarD2LoSe 0 0%
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Old 07-26-04, 05:57 AM   #16
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Old 07-26-04, 09:17 AM   #17
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Old 07-26-04, 09:52 AM   #18
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alrite.. the first guy had no structure, some creative ideas, but fuckall structure.. i wasnt feelin the verse very much at all.. you started off with a 2 line bar rhyme scheme, but then u fell off really badly and started riting lines that were all over the place..

i dont think i really need to go through the second verse, it wasnt anythin amazin either, but it beat the shit outta the first one.. thats why its gettin this vote...
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Old 07-26-04, 05:24 PM   #19
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2HarD2LoSe
structure was pretty good...flow was pretty consistent...no multis, as half of ur lines didnt even rhyme...wordplay was wack...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

GangsStarshit
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure was pretty good...flow was on lock...no multis...wordplay was decent...some of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
both had a pretty good structure...both had a consistent flow...neither had multis...neither had good personals...GangsStarshit had better wordplay and more connecting punches...so basing off of that...GangsStarshit had the better overall verse, so he gets my vote...

VOTE - GANGSSTARSHIT
 
Old 07-27-04, 04:03 AM   #20
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Old 07-27-04, 07:31 AM   #21
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Old 07-27-04, 10:40 AM   #22
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Old 07-28-04, 07:16 AM   #23
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Old 07-28-04, 11:44 AM   #24
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Old 07-29-04, 05:11 AM   #25
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Old 07-29-04, 09:38 AM   #26
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Old 07-29-04, 09:54 PM   #27
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Gangstarshit what the fuck were u thinkin to challenge me
this is like a white guy vsing a street legend G
7/10
Gangstarshit u and rap is like a puzzle that doesnt fit
my flows merk u rip ur eyes out and jerk you
7/10
beat u, and laugh at you, i keep tellin u u aint shit
but he keeps trying while crying like a little bitch
5/10
i spit acid when i ryme they get u in the eye everytime
makin u go blind, ur flows aint no hit, ill tell u what stick ur hand up ur ass
5/10
and maybe ull find better shit, my flowes just ran this poll
ill even help u out gimme a shovel and ill dig ur 6foot deep hole
7/10

2 Hard 2 Lose more like 2 Easy 2 abuse/
U'll get slaughtered like Jews or played like a bitch who's easy 2 use/
8/10
Dawg this is a battle not a case of who's feminine/
U can tell he likes the same type...postin pics of bare chested-men/
9/10~~~lol~~~
U should consider a name change to 'wanna beat me stand in line'/
Goto a gay bar and see how many men ask for a date...
.............................................and a collection time/
7/10
So please feel free to roam around...movins a make it a lil harder to hit ya/
U got more chance of spittin decent fya at me...
.................if u splured it from a flame thrower/
5/10
Your chances of overcoming this task...none should've allowed feeding/
So u could reflect this verse back...thats ur only chance of succeeding/
8/10

this came down 2 better wordplay and better punches which went 2

~~~~~~~~~~Gangsta~~~~~~~~~~~
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Old 07-30-04, 07:20 AM   #28
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Old 07-30-04, 08:57 AM   #29
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well

2: ya verse was lame, weak punches, off flow n bad structure.

gangstar: some decent wordplay, wasnt really feelin ya punches... word to ya ///'s bein newbish, get riddovem... get more personal... get more complex flow-wise... but hey least ya words rhymed... one better than the other guys

v/ gangstar
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