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Ibraheem takes this one. He had alright punches but enough to beat Manipulatoins. Most of Manipulations rhymes didnt rhyme and had me scratchin mah head after I read it. The punchlines that did rhyme seemed kinda weak. Ibraheem takes this with a better structure, metas, and punches hard enough to beat Manips.

Vote-Ibraheem

Vote on this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136785

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ok.jus to clear it up// moonwalk/swallowed a fork...i personally think rhyme..
the walk/fork part//........
but its jus the way u rap it i guess.......

antway uppin..........

ibraheem

This cat pming me thinking im cute and nice/
Faggot im forest fire and you on me like a cube of ice/
(played...weak)

You beating me like getting doubles on 10 pairs of dice/
6 to the power of 10 possibilities I mean Jesus Christ/
(hmmm)

pming me 6 times, on my dick like a china man on rice/
3 pms with the same exact words kid you need advice/
(Personal but not hard hitting)

You wont reach my height if you stand one a tower tiptoeing/
Manipulation joker you couldn’t get an elevator going/
(hmm?)

Begging me to spit first cause you’re fucking new/
Just like your mum pretend I’m the asshole she never knew
(not a good closer)

MaNiPuLaTiOn

ok your style looks bout as authentic as green gold..
only time u gonna b sick is when u catch a cold..
(Played also)

leave your record more backwards than the M.J moonwalk..
u couldnt spit "4 straight lines"..if ud swallowed a fork!..
(Decent)

why u frontin?...half your lines dont even rhyme..
u couldnt "blow-off" if ud hve stepped on a land-mine..
(Not bad but a little played)

i leave u more fucked and worn-out than a used condom..
only time you "cum-hard" is when you trying on your thong..
(Not bad)

jus like "general custa"..for you this is your last stand..
u the only guy i know,who is drowning..whilst living on land!..
(okay closer)

V/MaNiPuLaTiOn - Better wordplay and punches. Came more often too.

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lol does anyone consider the rhyme when taking votes
does the word rhyme rhymes with mine how about condom and thong voting on this site seriously makes me laugh

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of courwe RHYME/MINE..rhyme.u fuckin retard....
condom/thong.kinda rhyme 2.....

wtf????...............does anyone vote on punches????.
coz urs were fukin wack.............
madwe no sense at all..

shut the fuck up swayin....simple i won......
knob head fukin prick

vote on da prodigy vs exit wounds an i'll return the favor

yo this aint allowed^ if you wanna drop a vote then you're welcome i always return the favor with an honest vote

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Manipulation got this...more on point with the verse...hit harder...punches were ok sum lines played however i thought that they were better than ibs best lines (which there werent)...ibraheem u went off topic here dawg...this is a battle not a self-glory verse they have cyphers for that...also u both need sum elevation because the rhymes were basic flow was nice and struct not too bad but complexity is needed in both verses as i never felt this was a classic...

v/manipulation...rtf on ma sig i h8 sleepin

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i vote ibraheem cos in my own opinion he had better personals...and word play...manipulation...hmmm....she had some punches but as for me her word play and punches werent as INTERESTING as those of ibraheem...both had a decent strucure tho.....

vote : ibraheem

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